初中语文课本里的《白杨礼赞》选自茅盾同志的散文集《见闻杂记》,这种版本的《白杨礼赞》同《茅盾文集》里的《白杨礼赞》,有不少不同之处,主要修改四十多处。包括改变语序,选择句式;精选词语,规范语言;运用标点,变换语气等。通过学习比较,我深深体会到:锤炼语言在文章的修改中至关重要。通过学习比较,我做了如下的评注。(在评注 In the junior high school Chinese textbooks, “Poplar Ritual” is selected from Comrade Mao Dun’s essay collection “Reading Stuff”. This version of “Poplar Ritual” and “Mao Dun’s Collection” in “Poplar Ritual” have many differences, the main changes More than forty. Including changing the word order, selecting sentence patterns; selecting words, standardizing language; using punctuation, changing moods, etc. Through learning and comparison, I deeply realized that tempering language is crucial in the revision of articles. Through study and comparison, I made the following commentary. (In the commentary