一这几年“做作之文”很流行,不论平时训练还是应试拿分,不动真情、矫揉造作、讨巧献媚的作文随处可见,很可怕。比如:一做“朦胧‘诗意’”,掩饰自然的话语。如一次以“文化快餐”为话题的作文训练,一学生习作《文化快餐品读之感悟》中有这么几段话:闲云淡影自悠悠,物转星移几 In the past few years, the “artificial article” has become very popular. No matter whether it is training at the usual time or taking scores at the exam, it is very scary to read articles that don’t touch the true feelings, behave artificially, and make fun. For example, if you do “poetry, poetry,” and hide natural words. For example, a composition training with the theme of “cultural fast food” has a few paragraphs in one student’s “Perception of Cultural Fast Food Reading:”