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子衿说:这是一篇科幻类文章。冰冷的科技与细腻的感情相交融,是这篇文章夺人眼目的地方。徐皓想要反映的思想也很直接,那就是即使在科技进步的现代,人类真挚的感情依然是无法被战胜的。如果从文字方面来看这篇文章,徐皓的功力显然是欠缺的,字里行间依然流露出青涩稚嫩的感觉,对文字的掌控力不强。但也正是这种青涩的感觉使得整篇文章看上去毫无矫揉做作之感,反而增添了一份质朴的感觉。在现在这样一个写作类型单一化的环境中,徐皓能够通过科幻类的题材来表现感情,也算是别出心裁。希望以后他能够再接再厉。
Zi said: This is a science fiction article. The combination of cold tech and delicate emotions is the place for this article to grab the eye. Xu Hao wants to reflect the idea is also very direct, that is, even in the modern science and technology, the sincere feelings of mankind still can not be overcome. If you look at this article from the text, Xu Hao’s skill is clearly lacking, the lines between the lines are still showing Sentimental innocent feeling, the control of the text is not strong. But it is also the feeling of this Sentimental makes the whole article look like no sense of artificiality, but added a rustic feeling. In such an environment with a single type of writing, Xu Hao can express his feelings through the subjects of science fiction, and it can be considered a novelty. I hope he can make persistent efforts.