先看一篇李镇西老师的作文评讲课教学实录(节选):真情浓墨写童心第一个板块:榜上有名(我一边说,一边在屏幕上打出“榜上有名”四个字和一串姓名,大声念了这些学生的名字。我说:“这些同学的作文有一个共同点,就是感情真诚,而且描写真切。其中有两个同学的作文最为出色。”)第二个板块:佳作亮相(周晓竺、蔡峰同学登台朗读自己的习作;师生总结:“内容真实,感情真切,是这两篇文章最 Let’s look at an essay by Li Zhenxi’s essay teaching and commenting class (excerpt): The first chapter is written on the innocence of the truth: I have a name on the list (I said while playing on the screen” The word and a string of names read the names of these students in a loud voice. I said: “These students have one thing in common: their feelings are sincere and their descriptions are true. Two of them have the best compositions.” Two sections: the best appearance (Zhou Xiaoyi and Cai Feng read their own assignments on the stage; the teachers and students conclude: "The content is true and the sentiments are true. These are the two most articles.