高尔基说:“语言是一切事实和思想的外衣。”作文中善于用准确、生动、形象的语言进行表达是写好作文的重要条件。一篇优良的作文,往往有丰富的词汇、生动的口语和精采的语句,使人感受到语言美的魅力。但在考场作文中,由于考生生活知识贫乏,往往拣现成的词句来使用,致使不少作文陈词滥调,苍白干瘪,毫无亮色,缺乏形象感、新鲜感,更谈不上美感了。因而,这些习作虽选材新颖,布局巧妙,还是得不了高分,令人觉得可惜。 Gorky said: “Language is the garb of all facts and ideas.” The ability to express in an accurate, vivid, and vivid language is an important condition for writing good compositions. A good essay is often rich in vocabulary, vivid spoken language, and brilliant sentences that make people feel the charm of language beauty. However, in the examination essay, due to the lack of life knowledge of candidates, they often use ready-made words and phrases to use. As a result, many compositions are clichés, pale and dry, with no lightness, lack of sense of image, and freshness, even less aesthetic. Therefore, although these materials are novel in selection and clever in layout, they still cannot achieve high scores, which is a pity.