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在高考作文阅卷中.我们经常看到一些作文,材料切合观点,分析丝丝入扣,但就是组材欠考虑,文字欠斟酌。它们是未雕琢的璞玉,未打磨的浑金,常常埋没在二、三类作文中,十分可惜。考生若在提纲腹稿打好后,稍加思考、调整,稍事修改,就能让璞玉诨金大放异彩。下面这篇作文修改前是今年全国高考中一位考生的答卷,评为二类卷;经修改后,进人满分卷,应不成问题。一情蔽目昨见真知我曾经经历过这样一件事。一次,我去逛商店,远远看见体
In the college entrance examination essay writing, we often see some essays, materials that meet the point of view, and analyze silks and buckles, but it is the group that owes its consideration and the text owes its discretion. They are uncarved jade, unpolished gold, often buried in the second and third categories of writing, it is a pity. Candidates will be able to make a great difference if they take a little thought and adjustment and make a few changes after the outline draft has been laid. Before the following essay was revised, it was a candidate’s answer in the national college entrance examination this year, and was rated as the second class. After the revision, the entry into the perfect score should not be a problem. Seeing what I saw before, I had experienced such a thing. Once, I went to the store and saw the body far