这是一幅书写得很优美的书法作品。这幅作品是在某一个展览中荣获了书法一等奖的作品。从中可以看出吕潇同学的基本功是很扎实的,所以单从章法、用笔、结字来看,确实是一幅很成功的作品。但是,从正确地使用汉字这个标准来看,这幅作品里有一个简化字和繁体字混在一起使用了,还有一个错字,这样,这幅用字不规范 This is a beautifully written calligraphy. This work was the first prize in calligraphy in a certain exhibition. It can be seen from this that the basic skills of Lv Ji’s students are very solid, so it is indeed a very successful work from the point of view of composition, use of pens and knots. However, from the point of view of the correct use of the Chinese characters, there is a mixed use of a simplified character and a traditional character in this work. There is also a typo, and thus the word is not standardized.