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黄煊策同学的《山中访友》,是一篇讲述周末一家人出游登山的作文。作者用孩子的视角和璀璨的童心自然写来,使这篇纪实性的游记作文,带上了天真活泼的意味。《山中访友》这个题目,既表明作文的重点不是写登山,而是访友,写山上的小动物们,同时也用拟人化的手法使全文染上了一抹有趣、活泼的童话色彩。细致的观察、生动的描摹,是这篇作文的一个优点。“蚂蚁们排着整齐的队伍,浩浩荡荡”、“两条黑色的毛毛虫在悠闲地散
Huang Zhi policy students ”Friends in the mountains“, is a story about the weekend family mountaineering composition. The author uses the children's perspective and bright natural innocence to write, so that this documentary travel essay, with a naive and lively means. The topic of ”visiting friends in the mountains“ not only indicates that the main point of the essay is not to write the mountaineers, but to visit friends and write the small animals in the mountains. At the same time, it also uses anthropomorphic techniques to make the whole text a touch of fun and lively fairy tales. Meticulous observation, vivid tracing, is an advantage of this composition. ”Ants neatly arranged team, mighty“, ”Two black caterpillars leisurely scattered