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【文题在线】请以“我心目中的良师”为题,写一篇作文,立意自定,文体不限,不少于600字。【失误原文】我心目中的良师南京市六合区马鞍中学沈忠玉他长着一张圆脸,头发黑而发亮,根根上竖,一对明亮的眼睛,鼻梁上整天戴着一副白色镜框的眼镜,个子中等,穿着朴素,他嗓门很高,大吼一声,无论是谁都会吓一大跳。兴许,你们已经猜到他是谁了,没错,就是初二时教我历史的郭老师。(用猜测老师的方式开头,外貌描写应简略,不能面面俱到,应抓住人物
[Article online] Please “a mentor in my mind” as a theme, writing an essay, self-determined, style is not limited, not less than 600 words. 【Original】 mistakes in my mind, a mentor in Nanjing Luhe District Saddle School Shen Zhongyu He has a long round face, black hair and shiny, rooted vertical, a pair of bright eyes, wearing a white nose on all day Frame glasses, medium in size, wearing simple, his voice high, roared loudly, no matter who will be frightened. Perhaps, you have guessed who he is, yes, that is, the first two days to teach my history, Guo. (Beginning with the way teachers guess, the description should be simple, can not be exhaustive, should seize the character