在我们初学写作的同志中,经常会暴露出来的弱点是忽视人物形象的塑造。常常会有这样一类作品,不论是写学习、战斗、劳动,或者是其他的题材,往往只是罗列、堆砌生活现象和叙述一个事件的完整过程。错以为只要把事件详尽地写出来,就算完成了任务。这些作品中有的虽然也有张三李四的人物,也写了他们的对话和动作,但是这些人物只是起了解释事件的产生和发展的作用。结果使人感到事件满篇,空无一人,作品当然不会起到应有的效果。 In the comrades of our beginner writing, the weakness often exposed is the neglect of the shaping of characters. There are often such works, whether it is writing, fighting, labor, or other subjects, which are often only the complete process of listing, piling up life phenomena, and narrifying an event. Wrongly thought that as long as the event was written out in detail, even if the task was completed. Although some of these works also have the characters of Zhang Sanli and Li Si, they also wrote about their dialogues and actions. However, these characters only serve to explain the occurrence and development of events. As a result, people feel that the incident is full and empty, and the work will certainly not have the desired effect.