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[試题呈现]
假设你是李华,曾在美国学习半年,现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith,但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一电子邮件:
1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助;
2. 询问Mr. Smith 的近况并索要其联系方式;
3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意:1. 词数120~150;
2. 可适当增加细节。
[审题]
1. 体裁:电子邮件。
2. 时态:一般现在/过去/将来时。
3. 人称:第一人称。
4. 结构
开始称呼和问候。
接着是正文(The Body)部分:
因为你是主动写电子邮件给别人,首先就要表明你的意图,如I am writing to you for ...,I’m writing in reference to ...;
理顺要点,防止漏写、乱写以保证内容的完整性,然后将理顺的要点完整地表达出来;
有效衔接,串句成篇。正确地选用关联词,如however,what’s more,and,but,first,then,after等,使文章过渡自然、流畅;
正文最后还要写上感谢收信人的礼貌用语,如Thank you for ...及I look forward to hearing from you。
最后是结束语,如Yours truly,Yours respectfully,Yours sincerely,Yours faithfully等。
5. 表达
要凸显文章亮点,增加得高分机会,还要考虑到语言表达的多样性:既要使用简单句,也要使用复合句、并列句;措辞要讲究,既要使用普通词语,也要使用高级词汇。
习作 (麻城三中 胡敏)
Dean Tom,
I’m li Hua. Do you still remember me? I studied in your school for six months a couple of months ago.
I’m very grateful for your help that you gave me when I studied there. It was you who gave me a hand when I got in trouble. Without your help, my English couldn’t have been improved so quickly and I couldn’t have enjoyed myself so much. Do you know how everything is going on with Mr. Smith? I failed to get in touch with him after I left America. I will be very thankful if you could offer me his e-mail or telephone number.
I know that you show great interest in Chinese culture, don’t you? Therefore, I feel honored to invite you to visit our country during the Spring Festival to feel our culture. I’m firmly convinced that it will be an unforgettable trip. I will be very happy if you can accept my invitation.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,曾在美国学习半年,现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith,但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一电子邮件:
1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助;
2. 询问Mr. Smith 的近况并索要其联系方式;
3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意:1. 词数120~150;
2. 可适当增加细节。
[审题]
1. 体裁:电子邮件。
2. 时态:一般现在/过去/将来时。
3. 人称:第一人称。
4. 结构
开始称呼和问候。
接着是正文(The Body)部分:
因为你是主动写电子邮件给别人,首先就要表明你的意图,如I am writing to you for ...,I’m writing in reference to ...;
理顺要点,防止漏写、乱写以保证内容的完整性,然后将理顺的要点完整地表达出来;
有效衔接,串句成篇。正确地选用关联词,如however,what’s more,and,but,first,then,after等,使文章过渡自然、流畅;
正文最后还要写上感谢收信人的礼貌用语,如Thank you for ...及I look forward to hearing from you。
最后是结束语,如Yours truly,Yours respectfully,Yours sincerely,Yours faithfully等。
5. 表达
要凸显文章亮点,增加得高分机会,还要考虑到语言表达的多样性:既要使用简单句,也要使用复合句、并列句;措辞要讲究,既要使用普通词语,也要使用高级词汇。
习作 (麻城三中 胡敏)
Dean Tom,
I’m li Hua. Do you still remember me? I studied in your school for six months a couple of months ago.
I’m very grateful for your help that you gave me when I studied there. It was you who gave me a hand when I got in trouble. Without your help, my English couldn’t have been improved so quickly and I couldn’t have enjoyed myself so much. Do you know how everything is going on with Mr. Smith? I failed to get in touch with him after I left America. I will be very thankful if you could offer me his e-mail or telephone number.
I know that you show great interest in Chinese culture, don’t you? Therefore, I feel honored to invite you to visit our country during the Spring Festival to feel our culture. I’m firmly convinced that it will be an unforgettable trip. I will be very happy if you can accept my invitation.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua