比较而言,齐唱的这两篇文章,我更喜欢前一篇。不只是它没有一般学生作文的惯用腔调,主要在于,它选材的独到、文章内在的逻辑性,以及对生命对死亡的思考与追问,还有,它所弥漫的情绪——文中淡淡的忧伤与惆怅,文尾升起的那一抹温暖。试想,一群青春年少、生动活泼的中学生,在经过小区的公告墙时,有谁会注意到墙上贴着的那张讣告呢?即便注意到了,还有谁 In comparison, I sing these two articles, I prefer the previous article. It is not just the usual accent that it does not have a general student essay, but mainly its unique material selection, the inherent logic of the essay, the thinking and questioning of life to death, and the diffused emotions of it Melancholy, Wen Wen raised the touch of warmth. Imagine, a group of young and old, lively middle school students, passing through the community notice wall, who would notice the obituary attached to the wall it? Even noticed, who else