对一个整天和文学打交道的专业编辑来说,评点一个初中孩子的作文,我不抱期待。每天打开电脑,我要阅读大量文学作品,真要到自己写了,我已经累得趴下。所谓眼高手低,其实隐含着另一层意思:因为看得太多,那些可能的表达都稀释在别人的文字里了。说归说,我们还是忍不住要写。回头看张琳程同学的这三篇作文,如果用几个字形容,那就是:绵密冷静。这可大大超出我的预想。尽管此前我也评点 For a professional editor who deals with literature all day, I’m not looking forward to commenting on the composition of a junior high school child. Open the computer every day, I want to read a large number of literary works, I really want to write, I have tired get on the ground. The so-called eye-low, in fact, implies another layer of meaning: because too much to see, those possible expressions are diluted in someone else’s text. Say it back, we still could not help but write. Looking back Zhang Lin Cheng classmates these three essays, if you use a few words to describe, that is: dense cool. This can go well beyond my expectations. Although I also comment on the point before