We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring， the weather is cool and wind， I can fly kites when it has wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China， but not long time.
　　I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes， it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows， everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman， skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season， because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.
　　【简评】这篇短文是描述我的四季，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际写作的时候，我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。这篇习作讲的是我的四季，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。
　　指导教师：车宏逸