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优秀的文章就如出水芙蓉:清新、淡雅。但只有清水方能出芙蓉,要想让学生那混乱如浊水般的思绪变清,开出骄人的芙蓉,就需要从芙蓉之本、茎、叶、瓣等全方位地雕饰。一、芙蓉之本——写作范文的展示何为出水芙蓉,这需要有芙蓉的标本展示,方知芙蓉之淡雅。有些学生写作文,是为了应付老师,没有内容也要硬着头皮凑满600字,根本不考虑作文的质量如何。一部分学生的文笔不错,他们写的随笔或日记大都情深意切,但考场作文往往难得高分,有时还会离题。我以为,是因为这些学生不知在老师眼中何为优秀作品,他们只是凭自己的感觉写,没有把握阅卷的评分标准。
Excellent articles like water hibiscus: fresh, elegant. But only clear water can be a hibiscus, in order to make students that confusion as turbid water-like thoughts become clear, out of an impressive hibiscus, you need from the lotus, stems, leaves, petals and other comprehensive carved. First, the Lotus of the - Writing Pham Van show what is the water hibiscus, which requires a sample of hibiscus, hibiscus to understand the elegant. Some students write essays to deal with teachers. Without content, they have to bite their heads in 600 words without regard to the quality of the essay. Part of the students’ writing is good, they write essays or diary mostly affectionate, but the test essay is often rare high score, and sometimes leave the subject. I think it is because these students do not know what the excellent works are in the eyes of the teachers. They only write on their own feelings and fail to grasp the grading standards of the grading.