最近在病床上读了两篇关于学术性文章的规范化写作问题 ,一是《中央音乐学院学报》上刊登的周勤如同志的文章 ,二是《人民音乐》上发表的居其宏同志的文章 ,这两篇文章的立意、立论都是很好的 ,也是切中时弊的。但原谅我直率地说 ,文章都在文字上有些过于情绪化的缺点（特别是 Recently, I read two articles about the standardization of academic articles in the sickbed. One was an article written by Zhou Qin as published in the Journal of the Central Conservatory of Music and the other one was published in People’s Music, The two articles of the conception, the argument is very good, but also cut in the wrongdoing. But forgive me, to put it bluntly, the articles are all too literally too emotional (especially