近些年来,常会听到参加过中招、高考的阅卷老师说,很多考生的作文干巴空洞、平铺直叙,缺少生动性,没有意蕴。对于这些,我也有较为深刻的体会。这些问题很显然不是只在中招、高考中才出现,在整个中学学习过程中,也会出现以上的种种现象。我们经常会戏称这类文章为“小学三年级优等生作文”——没有 In recent years, often hear the trick, the entrance exam marking the teacher said many candidates dry and empty, straightforward, lack of vividness, no meaning. For these, I also have a more profound experience. Obviously, these problems do not occur only in the middle school entrance examinations. They have also appeared in the entire secondary school learning process. We often dub this type of article as “elementary school third grade student writing” - no