写作文的时候,你试过为了多写几个字,本来可以用一个单词的地方偏要用上几个词来代替(比如用at the present time代替now)吗?或者你新学了几个单词或短语,很想炫耀一下,于是就在文章里生搬了很多复杂的单词。事实上,这些做法往往会令你的文章变得冗长累赘,甚至令读者生厌。有时候,我们要狠下心砍掉多余的部分, At the time of writing, you tried to write several words in order to be able to use a few words instead of the place of a word (for example, at the present time instead of now) or you learned a few Words or phrases, would like to show off, so in the article moved a lot of complicated words. In fact, these practices tend to make your article lengthy and cumbersome, and even annoy the reader. Sometimes, we need to cut off excessively,