编辑点评:小作者很擅长环境与语言描写。在这样一场雨中,一家人在一起和谐有爱的画面在作者的勾勒下瞬间生动起来。作者让我们在氤氲的雨中,从一家三口真挚而平凡的对话里,感受到真实的生活和真正的幸福。一件平凡的小事,遗出了幸福的真谛。那晚,雨一直下,本想出来逛街的一家子,只好暂时找个吃饭的地方落脚。我和爸妈提着湿裤脚进了附近的一家粥店,随便点了些吃的。不一会儿,服务员便把三碗热气腾腾的粥摆在我们眼前。“好香啊!”我调皮地闭上眼,故作夸张地吸着鼻子, Edit Comment: small author is good at environment and language description. In such a rain, the pictures of a harmonious and loving family are momentarily vividly outlined by the author. The author lets us feel real life and real happiness in the rainy night from a sincere and ordinary three-person dialogue. A trivial little thing, the true meaning of happiness. That night, the rain has been down, wanted to go out shopping a family, had to temporarily find a place to eat. Mom and I put wet pants into the vicinity of a porridge shop, just ordered some food. In a moment, the waiter put three bowls of steaming porridge in front of us. “Good incense ah!” I naughty eyes closed, pretending to exaggerated suck nose,