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众所周知,高考英语写作在试卷中扮演重要角色,如何指导天祝藏区高中学生写一篇好的作文尤其显得重要。下面我就以一篇高考模拟试卷中的写作为案例,简述一下我關于英语写作的一点见解:审题——三段谋篇——添加格式,完成文章。
写作内容:假如你是新华中学的李华,得知你的朋友对中国文化非常感兴趣,而且爱好设计,最近听说中国日报网正在举办“中国文化符号表情包设计大赛”的事情,向你询问有关情况。请你给他写一封回信,要点如下:1. 参赛作品要求,参赛对象,投稿方式以及截止日期 2. 建议其参加比赛和表达期望之情。
注意:①词数100左右;②可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
一、审题
1.题材:电子邮件;
2.人称:一、二人称;
3.时态:一般现在时;
4.定要点定结构。
开头:点明收到朋友的来信,得知你的朋友对中国文化非常感兴趣,而且爱好设计,最近听说中国日报网正在举办“中国文化符号表情包设计大赛”的事情,向你询问有关情况。
主题段:写出前三个要点:参赛作品要求,参赛对象,投稿方式以及截止日期。
结尾段:写出第四个要点(建议其参加比赛)和表达期望之情。
二、三段谋篇
第一段;点题,自我介绍,写出来信的内容(对中国文化非常感兴趣,而且爱好设计,最近听说中国日报网正在举办“中国文化符号表情包设计大赛”的事情)和写信的目的(告诉他有关这次比赛的相关信息)。
I’m Li Hua, a friend of yours in china. (自我介绍)I’m glad to receive your email ,saying that you have keen interest in Chinese culture and are expert in design as well as know that China Daily is holding the activity called the Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols. So the purpose of the letter is to/ I’m writing to tell you some details about it.
第二段:主题段落展开:写出前三个要点:参赛作品要求,参赛对象,投稿方式以及截止日期。(注意使用恰当的连词把三个要点连接起来,使之成为一个整体)。
第一个要点:To begin with, your works have to be related to Chinese culture.(参赛作品要求)
第二个要点:Besides, anyone who is fond of emojis can participate in it.(参赛对象)
第三个要点:Last but not least, your works are supposed to be submitted to/handed in http://www. China Daily.com/ChinaDaily@163.com before May 30(投稿方式及截止日期。) 第三段:写出第四个要点(建议其参加比赛)和表达期望之情。
I sincerely hope you can sign up for(报名)it because not only can you know more about Chinese culture but also brooder your horizon, which is of great benefit to your design. I’m looking forward o your early reply.
三、添加格式,完成文章
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, a friend of yours in china. I’m glad to receive your email ,saying that you have keen interest in Chinese culture and are expert in design as well as know that China Daily is holding the activity called the Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols. So the purpose of the letter is to/ I’m writing to tell you some details about it.
To begin with, your works have to be related to Chinese culture. Besides, anyone who is fond of emojis can take part in/attend/participate in it. Last but not least, your works are supposed to be submitted to/handed in http://www. China Daily .com/ China Daily@163.com before May 30 I sincerely hope you can sign up for(报名)it because not only can you know more about Chinese culture but also brooder your horizon, which is of great benefit to your design. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、注意事项
提醒学生注意写作要点要齐全,要注意分段,恰当使用连词,尽量可以使用一些高级句式结构和高级词汇。
【作者简介】王海斌,甘肃省天祝藏族自治县第一中学。
【基金项目】本文系甘肃省“十三五”教育科学规划课题《藏区高中英语阅读与写作教学质量提升策略研究》的研究成果,课题批准号:GS[2018]GHB1172)。
写作内容:假如你是新华中学的李华,得知你的朋友对中国文化非常感兴趣,而且爱好设计,最近听说中国日报网正在举办“中国文化符号表情包设计大赛”的事情,向你询问有关情况。请你给他写一封回信,要点如下:1. 参赛作品要求,参赛对象,投稿方式以及截止日期 2. 建议其参加比赛和表达期望之情。
注意:①词数100左右;②可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
一、审题
1.题材:电子邮件;
2.人称:一、二人称;
3.时态:一般现在时;
4.定要点定结构。
开头:点明收到朋友的来信,得知你的朋友对中国文化非常感兴趣,而且爱好设计,最近听说中国日报网正在举办“中国文化符号表情包设计大赛”的事情,向你询问有关情况。
主题段:写出前三个要点:参赛作品要求,参赛对象,投稿方式以及截止日期。
结尾段:写出第四个要点(建议其参加比赛)和表达期望之情。
二、三段谋篇
第一段;点题,自我介绍,写出来信的内容(对中国文化非常感兴趣,而且爱好设计,最近听说中国日报网正在举办“中国文化符号表情包设计大赛”的事情)和写信的目的(告诉他有关这次比赛的相关信息)。
I’m Li Hua, a friend of yours in china. (自我介绍)I’m glad to receive your email ,saying that you have keen interest in Chinese culture and are expert in design as well as know that China Daily is holding the activity called the Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols. So the purpose of the letter is to/ I’m writing to tell you some details about it.
第二段:主题段落展开:写出前三个要点:参赛作品要求,参赛对象,投稿方式以及截止日期。(注意使用恰当的连词把三个要点连接起来,使之成为一个整体)。
第一个要点:To begin with, your works have to be related to Chinese culture.(参赛作品要求)
第二个要点:Besides, anyone who is fond of emojis can participate in it.(参赛对象)
第三个要点:Last but not least, your works are supposed to be submitted to/handed in http://www. China Daily.com/ChinaDaily@163.com before May 30(投稿方式及截止日期。) 第三段:写出第四个要点(建议其参加比赛)和表达期望之情。
I sincerely hope you can sign up for(报名)it because not only can you know more about Chinese culture but also brooder your horizon, which is of great benefit to your design. I’m looking forward o your early reply.
三、添加格式,完成文章
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, a friend of yours in china. I’m glad to receive your email ,saying that you have keen interest in Chinese culture and are expert in design as well as know that China Daily is holding the activity called the Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols. So the purpose of the letter is to/ I’m writing to tell you some details about it.
To begin with, your works have to be related to Chinese culture. Besides, anyone who is fond of emojis can take part in/attend/participate in it. Last but not least, your works are supposed to be submitted to/handed in http://www. China Daily .com/ China Daily@163.com before May 30 I sincerely hope you can sign up for(报名)it because not only can you know more about Chinese culture but also brooder your horizon, which is of great benefit to your design. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、注意事项
提醒学生注意写作要点要齐全,要注意分段,恰当使用连词,尽量可以使用一些高级句式结构和高级词汇。
【作者简介】王海斌,甘肃省天祝藏族自治县第一中学。
【基金项目】本文系甘肃省“十三五”教育科学规划课题《藏区高中英语阅读与写作教学质量提升策略研究》的研究成果,课题批准号:GS[2018]GHB1172)。