任蒙曾有十三年的军旅生活,他大部分诗都是军旅诗。《傍晚的草地上》是一首军旅诗。我认为它在任蒙所有的军旅诗中似乎更具诗意。诗意的生成是在女飞行员们把伸向蚱蜢的手又倏然“缩回”的一瞬间完成的。这是诗人的高明之处,也是此诗得以确立的支 Ren Meng had 13 years of military life. Most of his poems are military poems. “On the Grass in the Evening” is a military poem. I think it seems to be more poetic in all the military poems of Ren Meng. The poetic production was completed in the moment when the female pilots stretched their hands and then “retracted.” This is the poet’s brilliant place, and it is also the branch from which this poem was established.