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新华社今日电：“2月8日凌晨4时21 分左右,一辆行驶中的货车撞断一处跨线桥护栏,卧在京广线上下行线之间,与刚刚驶出湖南耒阳车站的N714次旅客列车相撞, 造成京广线60余趟列车晚点,货车上2名司机身亡……没有造成旅客人员伤亡。”写消息,对于新华社的人来说,应该是雕虫小技。那么,这条简单的消息写得如何呢？车辆相撞,人们首先关心的是人员的安危,然后才及其它。这条消息要是在“与……列车相撞”之后把叙述次序颠倒一下,说“货车上2名司机身亡,没有旅客人员伤亡,但造成京广线60余趟列车晚点”就像人话了。
Xinhua News Agency, today said: “At about 4:21 on February 8, a moving truck broke a cross-rail fence, lying on the Beijing-Guangzhou line between the down and the line, just out of Hunan Mianyang N714 passenger train station collided, resulting in Beijing-Guangzhou line more than 60 trains delayed, two drivers killed in the truck ... ... did not cause passenger casualties. ”Write the news for the Xinhua News Agency, it should be a small carving skills. Well, this simple message how to write it? Vehicles collide, people first concern is the safety of personnel, and then and others. If this message is reversed after the “collision with the train”, saying “two drivers on the truck were killed and there were no passenger casualties, causing more than 60 train delays on the Beijing-Guangzhou line” .