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话题概述
生活在大千世界,大家需要相互交往,参与各项活动,建立友好往来关系。社会与交往的话题写作主要包括志愿者活动、公益行为、合作与交往(包括和谐友善的朋友、同学交往)以及人与人的相处关系等。
有关社会与交往的题材内容是当今的热点话题,其作文有时候以叙事形式描述,有时候以日记方式表达,有时候以演讲、议论文或者调查报告等形式出现。
佳作赏评
My friends and I
We are graduating from our school soon. I had many friends in my school life and I miss them all the time, especially my best friends Robot and Tim.
We have been friends for three years. Three years ago, I was a new student in our class. I felt very lonely and worried. My English was very poor. Robot often helped me learn English. With his help, I made much progress in English. Tim likes playing basketball. He invited me to play together. Soon we became good friends.
Robot is more outgoing than me. Tim likes telling us some jokes and he always makes us laugh. I m quieter than them and I m good at playing basketball. We always got on well at school. Though we are different, we were happy together. They were kind and friendly to me.
I hope my friends Robot and Tim will have a bright future and our friendship will last forever.
【权威点评】
这是一篇有关人际交往话题的习作,主要谈论和朋友相处的事情。作文思路清晰,时态准确,详细叙述了昔日和朋友相识、相知的交往过程。
文章首先表明这是在回忆过去,确定文中内容为一般过去时态。在进行介绍时,especially、 lonely、 worried、 poor等单词的运用恰到好处,充分反映出了作者的心情。短语make progress、 play basketball、 be good at和be kind and friendly to体现出作者和好朋友在一起分享校园生活且不断快乐成长的内容。最后一段表达了作者对好友的祝福和期望彼此友谊长存,从而使整篇文章流畅、自然,达到水到渠成的效果。
思路点拨
在写作社会与交往话题的英语作文时,要把握一定的写作规律。
如果是讲述一次社会性活动主题的作文,多用记叙文体裁,并用一般过去时态展开描述,涵盖整件事情的经过,按一定逻辑顺序表述相关的内容。
如果是谈论某个社会活动的作用、意义或者影响性的作文,例如,如何为建设文明城市做贡献等内容,常用一般现在时态,重点表达个人的某些建议或者具体的看法等。这类作文在叙述时,一般都是开门见山,先点名事件,接下来再根据主题内容进行介绍、说明等。最后,用简短的句子进行总结或者阐述事件的影响、意义等。
如果是与同学、朋友、家人相处等体现人际交往类话题的作文,叙述时经常会用到一些表示心理反应的形容词和描述人物特征的形容词。
【高頻词语】
large 大的,quiet 安静的,poor 穷的,old 古老的,difficult 困难的,dirty 脏的,crazy 疯狂的,happy 幸福的, relaxed 放松的, excited 兴奋的, tired 疲倦的, scary 可怕的,bored 无聊的,hard 艰难的,hungry 饥饿的, sad 悲伤的,anxious 焦虑的,friendly 友好的,meaningful 有意义的,necessary 必需的,famous 著名的, food 食物, drink 饮料, book 书, clothes 服装,volunteer 志愿者, collect 搜集,party 聚会, club 俱乐部, send 送,suggest 建议,should 应该,cheer up 欢呼,had better 最好, prepare for 为……准备, without doubt 毫无疑问,decide to do sth.决定做某事,collect litter 收集垃圾, fix up 修理,make a decision 决定, help out 帮助某人摆脱(困境), clean up 打扫干净, give / hand out 分发, get on well 相处融洽,come up with 想出, make a plan 制订计划, put up 挂起, raise money 集资, give away 下发,take out the rubbish 倒垃圾, sweep the floor 擦地板,social groups 社会团体
【典型句型】 1. ... in order to... ……为了……
2.I think / hope... 我认为/希望……
3.A recent survey suggests that... 一项最近的调查显示……
4.That s probably why. 也许那就是原因。
5.Would you mind...? 你介意……吗?
6.I used to... and now I... 过去我……,现在我……
7.We re going to... 我们打算……
8.We should make our city more beautiful. 我们需要把我们的城市变得更美丽。
9.We saved the little boy in time. 我们及时救下了那个小男孩。
10.Sometimes they pick up some ... 有时候他们捡起一些……
11.It was very difficult for him to... 对他来说……很困难。
12.I d like to tell you something meaningful. 我想告诉你一些有意义的事。
13.Some companies have moved to ... from ... 一些企业已经从……搬到……
14.More students returned to China after graduation in foreign countries. 更多的学生在国外毕业后返回中国。
15.You can never underestimate some great nations! 你永远不能低估一些伟大的民族。
16.People need to know one another to be at their honest best. 人们需要相互了解才能达到最诚实的境界。
题例解析
作为一名中学生,我们不仅要有独立意识,还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中,我们能互相学习,互相帮助,共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤,能感受到爱与被爱。让团队合作精神伴随我们成长!
请你以How to learn together as a team?为标题写一篇英语演讲稿,代表学校参加达州市中学生英语演讲比赛。
要求:
1.卷面整洁(无污迹),书写工整(有美感)。
2.全文字数90词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入单词总数。
3.条理清楚,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确。
4.内容尽量包括提示信息,并适当发挥;文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
5.参考词汇:friendly, help, discuss(talk, listen), share, grow up.
How to learn together as a team?
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “How to learn together as a team”.
That s all for my speech. Thank you!
【2018·达州中考题】
【写作提示】
一、审题立意
这是一篇给范围的演讲稿,格式已经给出,只需要完成正文的内容即可。从所给的内容看,本文属于“合作与交流”类话题的作文。题目要求包含“互相学习,互相帮助,共同讨论,分享快乐与悲伤”。因此,作者需要从这几点说明团队合作的重要性。在写作时,应从三方面阐述:
1.团队合作的意义;
2.团队成员的具体做法;
3.呼吁所有人为团队生活而努力奋斗。
二、布局謀篇
这篇演讲稿可分成三段进行叙述:第一段,介绍团队的重要性,表明它对我们生活的影响;第二段,从自我的角度阐明作为团队成员需要怎样的身体力行,做到对团队负责,对自己负责;第三段,表达自己的期待,倡导大家共同努力,实现团队愉快的合作。
三、语句表达
首段已经给出,接下来作者需要阐述团队的意义,可采用Teamwork is ...作为开头。在讲述团队合作于个人成长的好处时,运用一些learn how to get along well with others、 share our experiences、 learn from each other 等短语和有关句子,表达团队生活对大家健康成长的必要性。
在接下来的个人行为讲述中,可使用be friendly to、discuss together、 helps us grow up 等短语和含情态动词can、 may、 need等的句子,以进一步详细说明主题内容,使文章更具有说服力。最后可以用“We need teamwork in our daily life.”等句子重申团队的重要性,呼应全文。
四、语法建议
本文的句子表达主要以一般现在时态为主,主体人称为第一人称,辅助为第三人称。
【参考范文】
How to learn together as a team?
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “How to learn together as a team”. Teamwork is always very important. It offers us chances to learn how to get along well with others and to share our experiences with others. We can learn from each other and help each other. But how could we learn together as a team?
In my opinion, we should be friendly to each other. When we have problems, we should offer help to others. Maybe we don t know how to do, but we can discuss together and find a solution at last. After all, when I walk along with others, I may be able to learn from them. Meanwhile working together with others helps us grow up. Many hands make light work. We need teamwork in our daily life.
That s all for my speech. Thank you!
嘗试练笔
我校将举办一场英语演讲比赛,主题是“倡导节俭,共建和谐校园”。请根据要求写一篇100词左右的演讲稿;内容需包括以下要点:
1.把用过的教科书和字典留给下届学生;
2.把自己不穿的或者不要的衣服洗干净,送给山区的孩子;
3.学会与他人分享,让学校生活更有意义。
具体要求:
1.文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
3.时态准确,语法正确,表达内容完整。
参考词汇:harmonious和谐的,meaningful有意义的
Dear friends,
We are living in a beautiful and warmer family. At school, we should help each other.
That s all. Thank you.
(答案见第64页)
生活在大千世界,大家需要相互交往,参与各项活动,建立友好往来关系。社会与交往的话题写作主要包括志愿者活动、公益行为、合作与交往(包括和谐友善的朋友、同学交往)以及人与人的相处关系等。
有关社会与交往的题材内容是当今的热点话题,其作文有时候以叙事形式描述,有时候以日记方式表达,有时候以演讲、议论文或者调查报告等形式出现。
佳作赏评
My friends and I
We are graduating from our school soon. I had many friends in my school life and I miss them all the time, especially my best friends Robot and Tim.
We have been friends for three years. Three years ago, I was a new student in our class. I felt very lonely and worried. My English was very poor. Robot often helped me learn English. With his help, I made much progress in English. Tim likes playing basketball. He invited me to play together. Soon we became good friends.
Robot is more outgoing than me. Tim likes telling us some jokes and he always makes us laugh. I m quieter than them and I m good at playing basketball. We always got on well at school. Though we are different, we were happy together. They were kind and friendly to me.
I hope my friends Robot and Tim will have a bright future and our friendship will last forever.
【权威点评】
这是一篇有关人际交往话题的习作,主要谈论和朋友相处的事情。作文思路清晰,时态准确,详细叙述了昔日和朋友相识、相知的交往过程。
文章首先表明这是在回忆过去,确定文中内容为一般过去时态。在进行介绍时,especially、 lonely、 worried、 poor等单词的运用恰到好处,充分反映出了作者的心情。短语make progress、 play basketball、 be good at和be kind and friendly to体现出作者和好朋友在一起分享校园生活且不断快乐成长的内容。最后一段表达了作者对好友的祝福和期望彼此友谊长存,从而使整篇文章流畅、自然,达到水到渠成的效果。
思路点拨
在写作社会与交往话题的英语作文时,要把握一定的写作规律。
如果是讲述一次社会性活动主题的作文,多用记叙文体裁,并用一般过去时态展开描述,涵盖整件事情的经过,按一定逻辑顺序表述相关的内容。
如果是谈论某个社会活动的作用、意义或者影响性的作文,例如,如何为建设文明城市做贡献等内容,常用一般现在时态,重点表达个人的某些建议或者具体的看法等。这类作文在叙述时,一般都是开门见山,先点名事件,接下来再根据主题内容进行介绍、说明等。最后,用简短的句子进行总结或者阐述事件的影响、意义等。
如果是与同学、朋友、家人相处等体现人际交往类话题的作文,叙述时经常会用到一些表示心理反应的形容词和描述人物特征的形容词。
【高頻词语】
large 大的,quiet 安静的,poor 穷的,old 古老的,difficult 困难的,dirty 脏的,crazy 疯狂的,happy 幸福的, relaxed 放松的, excited 兴奋的, tired 疲倦的, scary 可怕的,bored 无聊的,hard 艰难的,hungry 饥饿的, sad 悲伤的,anxious 焦虑的,friendly 友好的,meaningful 有意义的,necessary 必需的,famous 著名的, food 食物, drink 饮料, book 书, clothes 服装,volunteer 志愿者, collect 搜集,party 聚会, club 俱乐部, send 送,suggest 建议,should 应该,cheer up 欢呼,had better 最好, prepare for 为……准备, without doubt 毫无疑问,decide to do sth.决定做某事,collect litter 收集垃圾, fix up 修理,make a decision 决定, help out 帮助某人摆脱(困境), clean up 打扫干净, give / hand out 分发, get on well 相处融洽,come up with 想出, make a plan 制订计划, put up 挂起, raise money 集资, give away 下发,take out the rubbish 倒垃圾, sweep the floor 擦地板,social groups 社会团体
【典型句型】 1. ... in order to... ……为了……
2.I think / hope... 我认为/希望……
3.A recent survey suggests that... 一项最近的调查显示……
4.That s probably why. 也许那就是原因。
5.Would you mind...? 你介意……吗?
6.I used to... and now I... 过去我……,现在我……
7.We re going to... 我们打算……
8.We should make our city more beautiful. 我们需要把我们的城市变得更美丽。
9.We saved the little boy in time. 我们及时救下了那个小男孩。
10.Sometimes they pick up some ... 有时候他们捡起一些……
11.It was very difficult for him to... 对他来说……很困难。
12.I d like to tell you something meaningful. 我想告诉你一些有意义的事。
13.Some companies have moved to ... from ... 一些企业已经从……搬到……
14.More students returned to China after graduation in foreign countries. 更多的学生在国外毕业后返回中国。
15.You can never underestimate some great nations! 你永远不能低估一些伟大的民族。
16.People need to know one another to be at their honest best. 人们需要相互了解才能达到最诚实的境界。
题例解析
作为一名中学生,我们不仅要有独立意识,还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中,我们能互相学习,互相帮助,共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤,能感受到爱与被爱。让团队合作精神伴随我们成长!
请你以How to learn together as a team?为标题写一篇英语演讲稿,代表学校参加达州市中学生英语演讲比赛。
要求:
1.卷面整洁(无污迹),书写工整(有美感)。
2.全文字数90词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入单词总数。
3.条理清楚,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确。
4.内容尽量包括提示信息,并适当发挥;文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
5.参考词汇:friendly, help, discuss(talk, listen), share, grow up.
How to learn together as a team?
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “How to learn together as a team”.
That s all for my speech. Thank you!
【2018·达州中考题】
【写作提示】
一、审题立意
这是一篇给范围的演讲稿,格式已经给出,只需要完成正文的内容即可。从所给的内容看,本文属于“合作与交流”类话题的作文。题目要求包含“互相学习,互相帮助,共同讨论,分享快乐与悲伤”。因此,作者需要从这几点说明团队合作的重要性。在写作时,应从三方面阐述:
1.团队合作的意义;
2.团队成员的具体做法;
3.呼吁所有人为团队生活而努力奋斗。
二、布局謀篇
这篇演讲稿可分成三段进行叙述:第一段,介绍团队的重要性,表明它对我们生活的影响;第二段,从自我的角度阐明作为团队成员需要怎样的身体力行,做到对团队负责,对自己负责;第三段,表达自己的期待,倡导大家共同努力,实现团队愉快的合作。
三、语句表达
首段已经给出,接下来作者需要阐述团队的意义,可采用Teamwork is ...作为开头。在讲述团队合作于个人成长的好处时,运用一些learn how to get along well with others、 share our experiences、 learn from each other 等短语和有关句子,表达团队生活对大家健康成长的必要性。
在接下来的个人行为讲述中,可使用be friendly to、discuss together、 helps us grow up 等短语和含情态动词can、 may、 need等的句子,以进一步详细说明主题内容,使文章更具有说服力。最后可以用“We need teamwork in our daily life.”等句子重申团队的重要性,呼应全文。
四、语法建议
本文的句子表达主要以一般现在时态为主,主体人称为第一人称,辅助为第三人称。
【参考范文】
How to learn together as a team?
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “How to learn together as a team”. Teamwork is always very important. It offers us chances to learn how to get along well with others and to share our experiences with others. We can learn from each other and help each other. But how could we learn together as a team?
In my opinion, we should be friendly to each other. When we have problems, we should offer help to others. Maybe we don t know how to do, but we can discuss together and find a solution at last. After all, when I walk along with others, I may be able to learn from them. Meanwhile working together with others helps us grow up. Many hands make light work. We need teamwork in our daily life.
That s all for my speech. Thank you!
嘗试练笔
我校将举办一场英语演讲比赛,主题是“倡导节俭,共建和谐校园”。请根据要求写一篇100词左右的演讲稿;内容需包括以下要点:
1.把用过的教科书和字典留给下届学生;
2.把自己不穿的或者不要的衣服洗干净,送给山区的孩子;
3.学会与他人分享,让学校生活更有意义。
具体要求:
1.文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
3.时态准确,语法正确,表达内容完整。
参考词汇:harmonious和谐的,meaningful有意义的
Dear friends,
We are living in a beautiful and warmer family. At school, we should help each other.
That s all. Thank you.
(答案见第64页)