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母爱是高尚的。温馨,和谐,甜蜜,令人回味。台湾花莲凤林国中于立同学的《我和书》所揭示的母爱却是令人心酸的。文章写出了一个艰难跋涉于生活底层而不愿意看到自己的孩子在学习的奋斗中失望、退却、败下阵来的妈妈所做出的可敬的努力,也写出了一个稚气未脱、入世未深的中学生在与这种可费的母爱情感交流之中灵魂的激动与不安。文章以情节取胜,开合得当,错落有致、结局出奇制胜。文字平白而能饱含感情;议论简短,恰到好处。
Maternal love is noble. Warm, harmonious, sweet and memorable. The maternal love revealed by Yu Li’s “My Book” in Hualien’s Fenglin Junior High School in Taiwan is saddening. The article has written a respectable effort made by a mother who has trudged to the bottom of her life and does not want to see her children disappointed, retreated and defeated in the struggle to learn, and also wrote a childish attitude. The middle school students who are not deeply involved in the WTO are excited and disturbed by the soul in communicating with this kind of feeble motherly affection. The article wins with the plot, opens and closes properly, has a patchwork, and has a surprising ending. The words are plain and full of emotions; the arguments are brief and just right.