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2012年高考江苏卷作文题为“忧与爱”。当数以万计的考生将孟郊的“慈母手中线”拉长,用“一杯咖啡”“一瓶牛奶”“一把雨伞”等如出一辙的桥段行文令人昏昏欲睡时,有一篇素材独特、立意贴切、语言清新的优秀作文脱颖而出,获得了阅卷老师的一致认同。忧与爱江苏一考生从小,我就有落枕的毛病。早晨起来,我常常歪着脖子,疼得哭爹喊娘。这成了母亲日夜忧愁的一块心病。看着我痛苦的样子,母亲总是小心地替我揉
2012 college entrance essay Jiangsu volume essay entitled “worry and love ”. When tens of thousands of examinee lengthened Meng Jiao’s “mother’s hand line”, they used the same cup of coffee, a bottle of milk, an umbrella, Drowsy, there is a unique material, well-intentioned, fresh language excellent writing come to the fore, won the unanimous approval of the marking teacher. Worry and love a student in Jiangsu from childhood, I have stiff neck problems. In the morning, I often crooked neck, pain cry cry father cried. This became a sad day and night mother’s heart disease. Looked at my painful way, the mother always knead me carefully