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(配合五年级下册第27课《水》)《水》这篇课文是根据现代作家马朝虎先生的《饿水》改编而来的。作者将儿时缺水、盼水、用水、节水那段刻骨铭心的记忆娓娓道来,细腻而生动地描述了“雨中洗澡”“勺水解暑”时独特的感受,突出了水的无比珍贵,意在唤醒人们节约用水的意识。文章在带给我们心灵震撼的同时,更吸引我们眼球的也许还是精妙的语言和精湛的写作技巧。通读全文,每一个字眼,甚至每一个标点,都能很好地体现作者丰富的情感,比喻、拟人等多种修辞手法的运用更是精妙绝伦,为我们提供了一
(In conjunction with the fifth grade, Volume 27, “Water”) “Water” This essay is based on the modern writer Ma Chaohu’s “hungry” adapted from. The author of childhood water, hope water, water, water saving that unforgettable memories of his tireless, vivid and vivid description of the “rain shower ” “spoon water ” summer "unique feeling, highlighting Water is extremely precious, intended to awaken people’s awareness of water conservation. The article brings us the heart of shock at the same time, but also attract our attention may be exquisite language and superb writing skills. Throughout the full text, every word, or even every punctuation, can well reflect the author’s rich emotions, metaphors, anthropomorphic and other rhetorical devices are exquisite use of exquisite, provides us with a