当深刻的立意和新颖的构思了然于胸时,成就一篇优秀作文的基石已经奠定。但实际上,不少同学有了这块基石却仍然得不到高分,问题便出在语言运用上。大部分中考一类卷,抢人眼球的多为名句迭出、排比铺陈的“美文”。殊不知真正让人注目的是优美流畅的语言背后隐藏的思想。思维偏 When profound ideas and novel ideas were clearly revealed, the cornerstone of an outstanding essay was laid. However, in fact, many students with this cornerstone still do not get high scores, and the problem lies in the use of language. Most of the Chinese exams are of a kind, and most of the eyeballs attract people’s attention. Little do they know that what really catches the eye is the thought behind the beautiful and smooth language. Partial thinking