当年曾蓄一池清,时有蹄声伴水声。抗日此间皆热土,何须饮马到长城。(2015.2《中华诗词》)潘泓点评:从眼前实景拓展并来,由实到虚,由景及情,是七绝一法。这首诗开篇以“曾蓄一池清”予抗日联军遗迹以美丽想象,接着以“蹄声”二字把当年艰苦卓绝的战争环境带到读者眼前,此二句想象中有客观存在。 That year had a pool of clear, sometimes hoofed sound of water. Anti-Japanese are all hot springs here, why should I drink a horse to the Great Wall. (2015.2 “Chinese Poetry”) Pan Hong Comments: From the immediate expansion of real and come, from real to virtual, from the King and the situation, is a must. This poem begins with “had a pool of clear ” to the beautiful relics of the Anti-Japanese Forces Relief, and then to “hoof sound ” the word to the readers of the current arduous war environment, the two imagined objective exist.