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Last weekend we decided to spend a day in the country. The only trouble is
was
that other people had exactly∧same idea. We moved out of the city slowly behind
the
a long line of car. At last we came to a quiet country road and, before some
cars after
time, stopped on a lonely farm. We got our food out of the car but sat down
and
near a path at the foot of a hill. It was very peace in the cool grass—until we heard
peaceful
of bells ringing at the top of the hill. That we saw made us pick up our things and
What
ran back to the car. Hundreds of sheep was coming toward us down the path!
run were
One possible version:
Dear Bill,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to my hometown in May. You’ve made a wise choice to travel here. Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan Province, is located in central Sichuan and has a population of over 12 million. The climate is pleasant, neither too hot nor too cold. It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many famous places of historic interest, such as the Jinsha Ruin Site and the Wuhou Temple.
The transportation is convenient. You can travel to many places by bus, train, and subway. If the trip is short, you can also ride a bicycle or even travel on foot. I’m sure you’ll have a good time here.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Wei Hua is very good at her lessons at school. He liked watching TV after he
his likes
finishes his homework. His father does not allow him∧watch TV, because he is
to
afraid that it will be worse for his studies. But Wei Hua doesn’t think so. He thinks
bad
there is a lot of good TV programs. He can learn a lot from TV. For an example, he
are
can learn English through the English programs broadcasting on TV. He can also
broadcast/ broadcasted
learns Chinese, maths, physics, chemistry, and many other subjects. Because he learn So
thinks it’s good to a student to watch TV after he finishes his homework.
for
One possible version:
My High School Life Plan
High school life has just started. Everything seems new to me. I will try my best to make my high school life wonderful.
First, I want to make some true friends.We can help each other in trouble and share our life experience. I believe friendship can help me get over any difficulty.
Second, I’ll take an active part in sports activities to build up my body and keep fit. In this way I can concentrate more on study.
Third, I am weak in English. So I must improve my English and catch up with other classmates. Listening to English tapes every day is my plan. Besides, I will read more English magazines and newspaper to improve my reading and writing.
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A terrible storm took place in a summer night. The wind was so strong that
on
many trees∧brought down. It was already eleven o’clock. Li Ming, who had been
were gone
to night school, was still not back and his parents were very anxiously. Half an hour
anxious
late the wind stopped, and it was still raining. Li Ming’s parents were about to
later but
looking for him when he returned. Li Ming explained the storm has pushed over
look had
many big trees as well as telephone lines, block the roads. And the bridge had been
blocking
washed away by the floods. So he had to find the another way back.
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As we all know, an earthquake is one of the most terrible disasters. So what should we do when an earthquake comes?
When an earthquake happens, students who are in the classroom should get under the desks immediately and wait until it is safe to come out. If possible, run to the playground as fast as you can.
However, for those who are at home, get immediately under the table in the living room. Don’t go anywhere near the window and don’t jump out of the building. Never use the lift during the earthquake.
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Ever since the beginning of history, people∧dreamed of traveling to other
have
planets. For century, these wonderful dreams have remained dreams. But our
centuries
dreams would come true in the future. The first people from the Earth will land in
will on
Mars. But by the year 2170, people will have been set up cities and industries there.
And
Scientists are now making plans to travel among the Earth and Mars, so that
between
that will become possible for human beings to live and work there. So in order to
it
realize a dream, we must try∧develop our space technology as quickly as
the to
we can.
One possible version:
Sandstorms are getting more and more serious in some regions of China, which attracted people’s attention.
But what are the causes of the storms? To begin with, the desert in Mongolia forms the major source of the sandstorms. Besides, the continuous high temperature and little rain are also responsible for the storms. Furthermore, the destruction of forest and population growth also play an important role in the formation of serious sandstorms.
It’s high time we took effective measures to stop sandstorms. On one hand we should made laws to protect our environment. On the other hand, new technology and equipment should be brought in from abroad to meet our new needs.
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Once there was∧famous scientist. He thought not only about his work. One
a
afternoon he felt hunger. He went into the kitchen, boiling some water, and took an
hungry boiled
egg from the cupboard. He wants to boil the egg for three minute. He was thinking
wanted minutes
about his work, so he put his watch into the boiling water. He stood with the egg in his hand, looked for his watch, but he couldn’t find it anywhere. Then the servant
looking
came into the kitchen. The scientist was very surprising when she told him that he surprised what
was doing. How a lovely scientist!
What
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Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to receive your letter.
Like most of the people in the world, we have realized the importance of the environmental protection. In our city, everyone is called on to pay attention to it. You can see ads on TV, on magazines, or at bus stations. As a result, there have been some changes in our daily life. For example, when people go out, they choose to ride a bicycle, take a bus, or even walk instead of driving cars. When they go shopping, they prefer recyclable shopping bags to plastic bags for carrying things.
We are sure our city will become more beautiful.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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The temple stands near this city. It dated back to 1961 and is 50 meters high.
dates
It is one of the most famous temple in the country and about 50,000 tourists come
temples
to visit it in every year. Five years before, it was decided to repair the temple, but the
ago and
work was completed last year. The ground floor has been complete painted, and
completely
the roof, too. All the rooms have been protected from birds by fix wires across the
fixing
windows. Trees and flowers has been planted around the temple. We believe, by a
have in
few years, the temple will take on∧new look.
a
One possible version:
Changes in My School Life
Great changes have taken place since I became a senior high school student.
In the past, I used to walk to school, but now I ride to school or take a bus. When I was in high school, I watched television every day after school, but now I have to spend more time studying. In addition, I have made friends who helped me when I was in need. I used to be very shy, but now I can talk bravely in public.
With efforts, I know I am able to adapt to senior high school life quickly.
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In the morning of April 29, 2014, hundreds of millions of middle schools and
On
universities all over the China joined in a national student sports program. Eleven
thousands and I in our city took an active part in this program. The program was
thousand
holding to call on students to have daily exercise in the hope∧we will be healthy
held that
enough to study and enjoy themselves. I think it’s a good idea for us students to
ourselves
have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise, it is worth do it.
doing
Taking exercise every day help us build our bodies and keep a clear mind. By this
helps In
way we can feel energetic and study more efficient.
efficiently
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Dear Sir,
I’m writing to tell you something about the heavy traffic in our city.
More people have their own cars. It means that people are living a better life. It is convenient for them to travel around. However it does harm to us. The traffic in our city is more crowded. What’s worse, the air becomes dirtier.
In my opinion, our government should solve these problems. For example, we can limit the number of private cars. Everyone should be friendly to environment. If the trip is short, we can go by bus, by bike, or even on foot instead of driving our own cars. In this way, we can keep our environment clean and make our lives better.
Do you agree with me? I am expecting your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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As the world enter the 21st century, the development in science and
enters
technology will bring us more hopes and chances we’ve never imagined
ago. People are hoped to have a peaceful and highly developing world. To catch
before hoping developed
up with the new development but to be successful in the new century the young
and
generation is required to have different kind of skills and abilities, such as
kinds
computer science and English. Otherwise one will not be left behind. Young people will study even hard at school. And they will prepare them mentally and physically
harder themselves
∧meet the challenge of the new century.
to
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Life in the Future
In the future, man’s life will be very different from that of today.
First, with the development of medicine, people will live longer and healthier. Second, because of the discovery of new energy, the environmental pollution will be under control. Third, people’s daily life will change greatly, too. For example, robots will do most of your housework for you; you can take your video mobile phone with you and see the caller while speaking. The most exciting thing is that man will have more free time and each city will have its own spaceport, so you can even go into space for your holidays!
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Last Sunday after breakfast I decided to seeing a film. The cinema was a bit
see
far away,∧I had to take a bus there. When I was sitting on the bus, an old woman
so
got off. There are no seats free, so I stood up at once and said to me, “Come
on were her
here and take my seat, please.” The old women walked over and sat down. She
woman
was exciting, saying “Thank you very much, dear little girl.” Soon the bus stopped
excited
in the front of the cinema. I got off and waved goodbye for the old woman. I felt
to
very happily for doing a good deed.
happy
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With more cars coming into cities, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is important. First, we must obey the traffic rules. For example, we must walk on sidewalks.
We must tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and make calls while driving.
Cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody take traffic safety serious can we be safe when driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
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What a long winter vacation! I stay at home doing nothing except homework
stayed
every day as a robot. One day, an idea occurred to me: “Why not to find a part-
like
time job to learn something newly?” The next morning, before visiting many shops,
new after
I was lucky enough to find it in a small but pretty cake shop. When the tired-looking
one a
old man came in to buy some cakes, I immediately helped him sit down in a chair
and brought him the cakes. After he paid∧them, I said thanks to him. He looked
for
very happy but praised me with a satisfying smile.
and satisfied
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Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to learn that you want to be an international volunteer. In order to be a good volunteer, we should study a foreign language as well as body languages.
Body language varies from culture to culture. Take greetings for example. Traditionally, French are open-minded. They shake hands and kiss each other on both cheeks when they meet people they know. Men from Middle East and other Muslin countries often stand close to other men when talking, but they will never touch women. They just nod at women. Now people all over the world greet each other by shaking hands, but Japanese prefer to bow.
Studying body languages will help avoid misunderstandings and make communication more easily.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Lin Qiaozhi, the specialist in women’s diseases, lived∧1901 to 1983. She
a from
devoted her whole life to help women of China, especially that in the countryside.
helping those
To cut the death rate of having and caring for baby in the country, she gave some
babies
simple rules in her book for women to follow for keeping their babies clean,
healthy, but free from sickness. She was so busy in her career that about 50,000
and
babies are safely delivered by her own. Devoted to her patients, she chose not to were
have a family of her own and often worked lately at night to deliver a baby for a
late
poor family after a day’s tired work.
tiring
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How to Become a Scientist?
It is hard to be a scientist.
Firstly, we must study hard at school to get knowledge and develop our ability of exploring. Without scientific knowledge we can do nothing in the future, not to mention creating.
Secondly, I think one, who wants to be a scientist, must love science and enjoy creating new things. If we don’t love what we do we can achieve nothing. Thinking differently and independently is also a must.
Finally, insistence is the key to success. To do great things, we must believe in ourselves and stick to our dream no matter what difficulty is.
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During my stay in Britain, I went to some pubs with my friends to listen
to music or watch football match. On this way, I experienced part of the British
matches In
culture. Besides, I visited many libraries and museums but I also traveled to
and
several British cities. This was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience, which had helped me in many ways. First, I learn to be independent and make some
learned
decisions by me. Second, I got to know more about∧differences from Britain
myself the between
and China. I also made a lot of friends there and had my English improving, which
improved
has great enriched my life.
greatly
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A Trip to Beijing
During the National Day holidays my family took a trip to Beijing.
On October 1st, we took the 8:00 flight to Beijing and visited the Tiananmen Square in the afternoon. Next day, we visited the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world. For the next two days, we visited the Summer Palace, walked around, and went shopping. On October 5th, we took a bus to Tai’an City to climb Mount Tai, on the top of which we were lucky enough to see the sunrise early the next morning. We returned to Beijing that afternoon and went home by plane.
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Life on land probably began about 430 million years ago. It is thought that
life had existed in the water for perhaps as far as 3,000 million years. When we
has long
think of the first life on land, we probably think of strange animal coming out in
animals of
the ocean. But, in fact, no animals could have been living if plants had not been on
land firstly. Plants had to be on land after animals arrived. They supplied the
first before
first land animals∧food necessary to live in. Plants are the only form of life
with
that are able to get but store energy. Plants are so important!
is and
One possible version:
To be a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with others.
To gain popularity, we should take an active part in our class activities. We should be responsible for our class and keep teamwork spirit in mind.
To be popular, we must respect and care for others. Never hesitate to help those in need.
Besides, we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development, being good at lessons, sports, and so on.
In a word, to be a popular student we must set a good example in our class.
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Today our class organized an activity to climb Mount Qingcheng. We set off
by bus at 8 a.m. Half an hour late we arrived in the foot of the mountain. In order
later at
to get some exercises and enjoy the scenery more fully, we walk up instead of
exercise walked
taking the bus. The higher we climbed, ∧more tired we felt. And no one gave up.
the But
At last we all reached on the top, where we enjoyed our lunch and took many
photos. At 4 p.m., they returned home. Though I am still tired, I feel happily.
we happy
Above all, I have realized that we can succeed as well as we keep on.
long
One possible version: The summer vacation is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during it.
Some are in favor of staying home. They think it’s convenient and comfortable. What’s more, it’s hot outside and they have a lot of work to do. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since they can relax themselves and know more about our country. They take it a way of learning.
In my opinion, it is much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping with the housework.
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Mark Twain liked playing jokes on her friends. One day, one of his friends
his
lost their wallet and asked him to buy the train ticket for him. “And I don’t have
his a But
enough money to pay∧both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend
for
didn’t know what to do it. “Let’s do this,” Mark Twain says. “You can get on the
said
train and when the conductor come to check the ticket you can hide under my
comes
seat.” Lately, however, when the conductor came to check the ticket, Mark Twain
Later
gave him two tickets—one for himself and the others for his friend.
other
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
We’ve been learning English for a year since we entered senior high school. I’d like to share with you my experience in English learning.
First, I think it useful to remember as many English words as possible and master some basic grammar. And then, we should read English magazines and newspapers. Besides, keeping diaries in English is also effective to improve our English.
In my opinion, Learning English not only increases my knowledge of foreign cultures but also helps me communicate with foreigners.
Sometimes, however, I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have learned. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on learning English better.
Thank you for listening.
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Last weekend we decided to spend a day in the country. The only trouble is
was
that other people had exactly∧same idea. We moved out of the city slowly behind
the
a long line of car. At last we came to a quiet country road and, before some
cars after
time, stopped on a lonely farm. We got our food out of the car but sat down
and
near a path at the foot of a hill. It was very peace in the cool grass—until we heard
peaceful
of bells ringing at the top of the hill. That we saw made us pick up our things and
What
ran back to the car. Hundreds of sheep was coming toward us down the path!
run were
One possible version:
Dear Bill,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to my hometown in May. You’ve made a wise choice to travel here. Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan Province, is located in central Sichuan and has a population of over 12 million. The climate is pleasant, neither too hot nor too cold. It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many famous places of historic interest, such as the Jinsha Ruin Site and the Wuhou Temple.
The transportation is convenient. You can travel to many places by bus, train, and subway. If the trip is short, you can also ride a bicycle or even travel on foot. I’m sure you’ll have a good time here.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Wei Hua is very good at her lessons at school. He liked watching TV after he
his likes
finishes his homework. His father does not allow him∧watch TV, because he is
to
afraid that it will be worse for his studies. But Wei Hua doesn’t think so. He thinks
bad
there is a lot of good TV programs. He can learn a lot from TV. For an example, he
are
can learn English through the English programs broadcasting on TV. He can also
broadcast/ broadcasted
learns Chinese, maths, physics, chemistry, and many other subjects. Because he learn So
thinks it’s good to a student to watch TV after he finishes his homework.
for
One possible version:
My High School Life Plan
High school life has just started. Everything seems new to me. I will try my best to make my high school life wonderful.
First, I want to make some true friends.We can help each other in trouble and share our life experience. I believe friendship can help me get over any difficulty.
Second, I’ll take an active part in sports activities to build up my body and keep fit. In this way I can concentrate more on study.
Third, I am weak in English. So I must improve my English and catch up with other classmates. Listening to English tapes every day is my plan. Besides, I will read more English magazines and newspaper to improve my reading and writing.
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A terrible storm took place in a summer night. The wind was so strong that
on
many trees∧brought down. It was already eleven o’clock. Li Ming, who had been
were gone
to night school, was still not back and his parents were very anxiously. Half an hour
anxious
late the wind stopped, and it was still raining. Li Ming’s parents were about to
later but
looking for him when he returned. Li Ming explained the storm has pushed over
look had
many big trees as well as telephone lines, block the roads. And the bridge had been
blocking
washed away by the floods. So he had to find the another way back.
One possible version:
As we all know, an earthquake is one of the most terrible disasters. So what should we do when an earthquake comes?
When an earthquake happens, students who are in the classroom should get under the desks immediately and wait until it is safe to come out. If possible, run to the playground as fast as you can.
However, for those who are at home, get immediately under the table in the living room. Don’t go anywhere near the window and don’t jump out of the building. Never use the lift during the earthquake.
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Ever since the beginning of history, people∧dreamed of traveling to other
have
planets. For century, these wonderful dreams have remained dreams. But our
centuries
dreams would come true in the future. The first people from the Earth will land in
will on
Mars. But by the year 2170, people will have been set up cities and industries there.
And
Scientists are now making plans to travel among the Earth and Mars, so that
between
that will become possible for human beings to live and work there. So in order to
it
realize a dream, we must try∧develop our space technology as quickly as
the to
we can.
One possible version:
Sandstorms are getting more and more serious in some regions of China, which attracted people’s attention.
But what are the causes of the storms? To begin with, the desert in Mongolia forms the major source of the sandstorms. Besides, the continuous high temperature and little rain are also responsible for the storms. Furthermore, the destruction of forest and population growth also play an important role in the formation of serious sandstorms.
It’s high time we took effective measures to stop sandstorms. On one hand we should made laws to protect our environment. On the other hand, new technology and equipment should be brought in from abroad to meet our new needs.
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Once there was∧famous scientist. He thought not only about his work. One
a
afternoon he felt hunger. He went into the kitchen, boiling some water, and took an
hungry boiled
egg from the cupboard. He wants to boil the egg for three minute. He was thinking
wanted minutes
about his work, so he put his watch into the boiling water. He stood with the egg in his hand, looked for his watch, but he couldn’t find it anywhere. Then the servant
looking
came into the kitchen. The scientist was very surprising when she told him that he surprised what
was doing. How a lovely scientist!
What
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Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to receive your letter.
Like most of the people in the world, we have realized the importance of the environmental protection. In our city, everyone is called on to pay attention to it. You can see ads on TV, on magazines, or at bus stations. As a result, there have been some changes in our daily life. For example, when people go out, they choose to ride a bicycle, take a bus, or even walk instead of driving cars. When they go shopping, they prefer recyclable shopping bags to plastic bags for carrying things.
We are sure our city will become more beautiful.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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The temple stands near this city. It dated back to 1961 and is 50 meters high.
dates
It is one of the most famous temple in the country and about 50,000 tourists come
temples
to visit it in every year. Five years before, it was decided to repair the temple, but the
ago and
work was completed last year. The ground floor has been complete painted, and
completely
the roof, too. All the rooms have been protected from birds by fix wires across the
fixing
windows. Trees and flowers has been planted around the temple. We believe, by a
have in
few years, the temple will take on∧new look.
a
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Changes in My School Life
Great changes have taken place since I became a senior high school student.
In the past, I used to walk to school, but now I ride to school or take a bus. When I was in high school, I watched television every day after school, but now I have to spend more time studying. In addition, I have made friends who helped me when I was in need. I used to be very shy, but now I can talk bravely in public.
With efforts, I know I am able to adapt to senior high school life quickly.
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In the morning of April 29, 2014, hundreds of millions of middle schools and
On
universities all over the China joined in a national student sports program. Eleven
thousands and I in our city took an active part in this program. The program was
thousand
holding to call on students to have daily exercise in the hope∧we will be healthy
held that
enough to study and enjoy themselves. I think it’s a good idea for us students to
ourselves
have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise, it is worth do it.
doing
Taking exercise every day help us build our bodies and keep a clear mind. By this
helps In
way we can feel energetic and study more efficient.
efficiently
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Dear Sir,
I’m writing to tell you something about the heavy traffic in our city.
More people have their own cars. It means that people are living a better life. It is convenient for them to travel around. However it does harm to us. The traffic in our city is more crowded. What’s worse, the air becomes dirtier.
In my opinion, our government should solve these problems. For example, we can limit the number of private cars. Everyone should be friendly to environment. If the trip is short, we can go by bus, by bike, or even on foot instead of driving our own cars. In this way, we can keep our environment clean and make our lives better.
Do you agree with me? I am expecting your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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As the world enter the 21st century, the development in science and
enters
technology will bring us more hopes and chances we’ve never imagined
ago. People are hoped to have a peaceful and highly developing world. To catch
before hoping developed
up with the new development but to be successful in the new century the young
and
generation is required to have different kind of skills and abilities, such as
kinds
computer science and English. Otherwise one will not be left behind. Young people will study even hard at school. And they will prepare them mentally and physically
harder themselves
∧meet the challenge of the new century.
to
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Life in the Future
In the future, man’s life will be very different from that of today.
First, with the development of medicine, people will live longer and healthier. Second, because of the discovery of new energy, the environmental pollution will be under control. Third, people’s daily life will change greatly, too. For example, robots will do most of your housework for you; you can take your video mobile phone with you and see the caller while speaking. The most exciting thing is that man will have more free time and each city will have its own spaceport, so you can even go into space for your holidays!
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Last Sunday after breakfast I decided to seeing a film. The cinema was a bit
see
far away,∧I had to take a bus there. When I was sitting on the bus, an old woman
so
got off. There are no seats free, so I stood up at once and said to me, “Come
on were her
here and take my seat, please.” The old women walked over and sat down. She
woman
was exciting, saying “Thank you very much, dear little girl.” Soon the bus stopped
excited
in the front of the cinema. I got off and waved goodbye for the old woman. I felt
to
very happily for doing a good deed.
happy
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With more cars coming into cities, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is important. First, we must obey the traffic rules. For example, we must walk on sidewalks.
We must tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and make calls while driving.
Cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody take traffic safety serious can we be safe when driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
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What a long winter vacation! I stay at home doing nothing except homework
stayed
every day as a robot. One day, an idea occurred to me: “Why not to find a part-
like
time job to learn something newly?” The next morning, before visiting many shops,
new after
I was lucky enough to find it in a small but pretty cake shop. When the tired-looking
one a
old man came in to buy some cakes, I immediately helped him sit down in a chair
and brought him the cakes. After he paid∧them, I said thanks to him. He looked
for
very happy but praised me with a satisfying smile.
and satisfied
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Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to learn that you want to be an international volunteer. In order to be a good volunteer, we should study a foreign language as well as body languages.
Body language varies from culture to culture. Take greetings for example. Traditionally, French are open-minded. They shake hands and kiss each other on both cheeks when they meet people they know. Men from Middle East and other Muslin countries often stand close to other men when talking, but they will never touch women. They just nod at women. Now people all over the world greet each other by shaking hands, but Japanese prefer to bow.
Studying body languages will help avoid misunderstandings and make communication more easily.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Lin Qiaozhi, the specialist in women’s diseases, lived∧1901 to 1983. She
a from
devoted her whole life to help women of China, especially that in the countryside.
helping those
To cut the death rate of having and caring for baby in the country, she gave some
babies
simple rules in her book for women to follow for keeping their babies clean,
healthy, but free from sickness. She was so busy in her career that about 50,000
and
babies are safely delivered by her own. Devoted to her patients, she chose not to were
have a family of her own and often worked lately at night to deliver a baby for a
late
poor family after a day’s tired work.
tiring
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How to Become a Scientist?
It is hard to be a scientist.
Firstly, we must study hard at school to get knowledge and develop our ability of exploring. Without scientific knowledge we can do nothing in the future, not to mention creating.
Secondly, I think one, who wants to be a scientist, must love science and enjoy creating new things. If we don’t love what we do we can achieve nothing. Thinking differently and independently is also a must.
Finally, insistence is the key to success. To do great things, we must believe in ourselves and stick to our dream no matter what difficulty is.
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During my stay in Britain, I went to some pubs with my friends to listen
to music or watch football match. On this way, I experienced part of the British
matches In
culture. Besides, I visited many libraries and museums but I also traveled to
and
several British cities. This was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience, which had helped me in many ways. First, I learn to be independent and make some
learned
decisions by me. Second, I got to know more about∧differences from Britain
myself the between
and China. I also made a lot of friends there and had my English improving, which
improved
has great enriched my life.
greatly
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A Trip to Beijing
During the National Day holidays my family took a trip to Beijing.
On October 1st, we took the 8:00 flight to Beijing and visited the Tiananmen Square in the afternoon. Next day, we visited the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world. For the next two days, we visited the Summer Palace, walked around, and went shopping. On October 5th, we took a bus to Tai’an City to climb Mount Tai, on the top of which we were lucky enough to see the sunrise early the next morning. We returned to Beijing that afternoon and went home by plane.
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Life on land probably began about 430 million years ago. It is thought that
life had existed in the water for perhaps as far as 3,000 million years. When we
has long
think of the first life on land, we probably think of strange animal coming out in
animals of
the ocean. But, in fact, no animals could have been living if plants had not been on
land firstly. Plants had to be on land after animals arrived. They supplied the
first before
first land animals∧food necessary to live in. Plants are the only form of life
with
that are able to get but store energy. Plants are so important!
is and
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To be a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with others.
To gain popularity, we should take an active part in our class activities. We should be responsible for our class and keep teamwork spirit in mind.
To be popular, we must respect and care for others. Never hesitate to help those in need.
Besides, we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development, being good at lessons, sports, and so on.
In a word, to be a popular student we must set a good example in our class.
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Today our class organized an activity to climb Mount Qingcheng. We set off
by bus at 8 a.m. Half an hour late we arrived in the foot of the mountain. In order
later at
to get some exercises and enjoy the scenery more fully, we walk up instead of
exercise walked
taking the bus. The higher we climbed, ∧more tired we felt. And no one gave up.
the But
At last we all reached on the top, where we enjoyed our lunch and took many
photos. At 4 p.m., they returned home. Though I am still tired, I feel happily.
we happy
Above all, I have realized that we can succeed as well as we keep on.
long
One possible version: The summer vacation is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during it.
Some are in favor of staying home. They think it’s convenient and comfortable. What’s more, it’s hot outside and they have a lot of work to do. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since they can relax themselves and know more about our country. They take it a way of learning.
In my opinion, it is much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping with the housework.
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Mark Twain liked playing jokes on her friends. One day, one of his friends
his
lost their wallet and asked him to buy the train ticket for him. “And I don’t have
his a But
enough money to pay∧both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend
for
didn’t know what to do it. “Let’s do this,” Mark Twain says. “You can get on the
said
train and when the conductor come to check the ticket you can hide under my
comes
seat.” Lately, however, when the conductor came to check the ticket, Mark Twain
Later
gave him two tickets—one for himself and the others for his friend.
other
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Good morning, everyone!
We’ve been learning English for a year since we entered senior high school. I’d like to share with you my experience in English learning.
First, I think it useful to remember as many English words as possible and master some basic grammar. And then, we should read English magazines and newspapers. Besides, keeping diaries in English is also effective to improve our English.
In my opinion, Learning English not only increases my knowledge of foreign cultures but also helps me communicate with foreigners.
Sometimes, however, I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have learned. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on learning English better.
Thank you for listening.