把语言锤炼得更生动一些一篇通讯能不能写成功，除了主题要鲜明，事例要过硬，结构要巧妙外，还要看语言是否有特色。笔者十多年前曾经采写过一篇题为《邙山脚下稻谷香》的通讯，这篇通讯是用第一人称写的，在《解放军报》上发表后，几位新闻界的老前辈说了一些鼓励的话，他们 The language is tempered more vividly Some communications can not write a success, in addition to the theme to be clear, the case should be perfect, the structure should be clever, but also depends on whether the language has its own characteristics. I wrote and wrote an article entitled “Rice Paddy at the foot of the hillside” more than a decade ago. This communication was written in the first person. After the publication in the “Liberation Army Daily,” several veterans of the press said Some encouraging words for them