一、教材的阐述《一夜的工作》是作者目睹周恩来总理一夜的工作后发自肺腑的感叹,抒发了作者热爱总理的思想感情。我仔细阅读课文,发现课文可以按“叙事”和“感叹”分成两个部分。第一部分是前六个自然段为“叙事”;第二部分是最后两个自然段,写的是叙事后的“感叹”。对于六年级的学生,要提升他们的写作水平,很有必要培养他们针对人或事发表感叹的能 First, the textbook elaboration “Overnight work” is the author witnessed Premier Zhou Enlai night after work from the heartfelt sigh, expressed the author’s love of the Prime Minister’s thoughts and feelings. I read the text carefully and found that the text can be divided into two parts by “narration ” and “sigh ”. The first part is the first six natural paragraphs for “narrative”; the second part is the last two paragraphs, written after the narrative “sighs.” For sixth-graders, to improve their writing skills, it is necessary to train them to give sighs to people or things