批阅学生习作,深感学生所写记叙文普遍患有三大通病。我将其戏称为“怀旧症”、“骷髅症”、“败血症”。病名:怀旧症病症:选材不新。即专写过去的人和事。一种是对身边的人和事视而不见,宁可舍近求远。初中生写《我的老师》,大多数会写小学时的老师。另 After reviewing the student’s assignments, I felt deeply that the students’ narratives generally suffer from three common problems. I dubbed it the “Nostalgia,” “Deficiency,” and “Septicemia.” Disease name: nostalgia symptoms: selection is not new. That is, write about people and things in the past. One is to turn a blind eye to the people and things around them, preferring to be closer. Junior high school students write “My Teacher”. Most of them write teachers for elementary school. another