本文从诗歌写作的技术层面,探讨马华诗人方路在诗歌创作上三个问题。首先讨论诗中的灰暗抒情风格的形成,特别是“哀而不伤,言而不尽”的抒情手法,以及独特的句构所造成的正负面影响。其次,挖掘出方路从抒情转向叙事的演化轨迹,以及支持其叙事技巧的散文诗创作。最后,回到苦难叙事的议题上,分析方路自定义的三阶段创作理念——“伤感、悲情、忏悔”——所必须面对的问题。 This paper explores three issues on the poetic creation of the MCA poet Fang Lu from the technical aspect of poem writing. First of all, we will discuss the formation of the gray lyric style in the poem, especially the lyrical technique of “sorrow without injury, words and endless”, as well as the positive and negative influences caused by the unique sentence structure. Secondly, dig out the evolvement of the square road from the lyric to the narrative, as well as the prose poem writing that supports its narrative skills. At last, we return to the subject of suffering narrative and analyze the problems that must be confronted with the three-phase creative concept of “custom, sadness, sadness and confession”.