尊敬的编辑:你们好!我是一位初中语文教师,有幸看到《少年作文辅导》(小学版),觉得也给了我许多帮助。朋友的小孩暑假来我家让我辅导写作,她拿来了自己订的你们的刊物,她说她写景不会写,其中那一期里就有关于写景的指导,里面有朱自清的《荷塘月色》以及一些写景的片段,我让她反 Dear Editor: How are you! I am a junior high school language teacher, fortunate enough to see “Junior Composition Counseling” (Primary Edition), I feel that has given me a lot of help. My friend's summer vacation came to my house for counseling and writing. She brought her own publications. She said she would not write a scene. In that period, she had instructions on how to write a scene. There was “Moonlight in Lotus Pond” "And some scenes of the fragment, I let her anti