写人,免不了要描写人的动作,因为一个人的思想、品质、性格和作风,往往通过行为动作来表现。如同学们学过的《金色的鱼钩》一课中,有这样一段描写老红军的话:“他坐在那里捧着搪瓷碗,嚼着几根草根和我们吃剩的鱼骨头,嚼了一会儿,就皱着眉头硬咽下去。”这段话描写了红军老班长连续五个动作。用“坐、捧、嚼、皱、咽”五个准确的动词,写出了老班长在二 Write people, inevitably describe the person’s actions, because a person’s thinking, quality, character and style, often through action to performance. As the classics learned about the “Golden Hooks”, there was a passage describing the Old Red Army: “He sat there holding enamel bowls, chewing a few grass roots and the leftover fish bones and chewing In a moment, frowned and swallowed. ”This passage describes the Red Army squad leader for five consecutive actions. With “sitting, holding, chewing, wrinkles, swallow ” five accurate verbs, wrote the old monitor in two