在记叙文作文训练中,我们发现仍有太多的短板和不足。主要表现在:1.兴趣缺失。由于缺乏阅读积累,学生在实际写作中就显得困难重重——材料欠缺、不懂技巧,写出来的文章自然平淡无味、乏善可陈。这样的写作状态,自然就难以唤醒学生的兴趣。2.素材乏力。很多学生对生活中发生的事情熟视无睹,不注意观察,更不去主动思考。教师也缺少指导学生观察的意识和能力,忽视对学生内心的写作冲动 In the narrative essay training, we found that there are still too many shortcomings and deficiencies. Mainly in: 1. Lack of interest. Due to the lack of reading accumulation, students in the actual writing is very difficult - the lack of material, do not understand skills, writing articles naturally dull, lackluster. This writing state, it is difficult to arouse the students’ interest naturally. 2 material fatigue. Many students turn a blind eye to what’s happening in their lives, not paying attention to observations, not to thinking actively. Teachers also lack the awareness and ability to guide students to observe, ignoring the student’s impulse to write