默默无闻的修表匠

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内容提要:爷爷当了大半辈子的修表匠,他总默默无闻地埋头修手表,还说看到手表就像看到他的孙女一样,直到今天,“我”才真正理解他……报道亮点:1.以第二人称“您”进行习作,便于抒怀,易于打动读者;2.虽没有具体描写某一件事,但从细节入手,通过语言、神态与动作描写来刻画爷爷的形象,入木三分;3.结尾抒情浓烈,为 Description: Grandpa as a watchmaker for most of his life, he always buried obscure watch repair, and said to see the watch as to see his granddaughter, until today, “I” really understand him ... ... Report Highlights: 1. To the second person “you ” for ease of expression, easy to impress readers; 2. Although there is no specific description of a thing, but from the details, through the language, demeanor and portrayal to describe the image of grandpa , Into the wood third; 3 end of lyrical, for
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