[表现]作文虚浮与庸俗我们的学生不是在作文,而是在做文,是为了考试,为了高分而做华丽文,做虚假文。可怕!一是“诗意”朦胧,掩饰自然的话语。如一次以“文化快餐”为话题,一学生习作《文化快餐品读之感悟》中有这么几段话: [Presentation] The essay is vain and vulgar. Our students are not writing, but are writing articles. They are for exams. They do gorgeous writing for high scores and make false texts. Terrible! First, “poetic” ambiguous, disguising the natural language. For example, once a topic of “cultural fast food ”, there are several paragraphs in a student’s work, “Sentiment of Cultural Fast Food Reading:”