杨烁小朋友创作的《毛泽东主席诗·冬云》,结体大方,但字体过大,给人造成一种透不过气来的沉闷感,这一点一定要引起注意。作品中表现难得的地方是斜点、三点水、四点底写得较好,有神态,较传情。像“更”、“飞”等字写得较漂亮。但从落款来看,不免显得草率,作品 The poem “Winter Poems by Chairman Mao Zedong” by Yang Shuo’s children is generous in structure. However, if the typeface is too large, it will create a breathless sense of dullness. This point must be paid attention to. The performance of rare works in the place is the oblique point, three water, four at the end write better, demeanor, more telling. Words like “more”, “fly” are more beautifully written. However, from the point of view, inevitably seem sloppy, works