辅导点拨:小作者笔下的母爱是那样朴实而真实。从生活的细节入手,抓住常被我们忽视的场景描写妈妈的爱。那紧紧把孩子护在身边的一幕是多么真实而感人,马路上常见的动作——“拉”更是撞击着读者的心灵。“牵紧我的手,我们过马路了。”四岁那年,有一天妈妈带我过马路吃早餐,她对我这样说。 Counseling tips: The small author’s maternal love is so simple and real. Starting from the details of life, to seize the scenes often overlooked by our mother’s love. It is so real and touching that the scene of keeping the child in his side is closely related to the reader’s heart. “Hold my hand and we cross the street. ” Four year old, one day my mother took me to cross the road to eat breakfast, she said to me.