完美的交响乐,如同细细编织的锦缎,离不开互动与配合,倾听与挥洒。学生写作与名师点评的穿插是创造和鉴赏的结合,最和谐的交响乐由此缓缓流淌而出。沈从文先生的墓碑上写着这样几个字:“照我思索,能理解‘我’;照我思索,可认识‘人’。”他在《习作选集代序》中写过这样一段话:“这世界上或有想在沙基或水面匕建造崇楼杰阁的人,那可不是我,我只想造希腊小庙。选山地作基础,用坚硬石头堆砌它。精致、结实、匀称,形体虽小而不纤巧,是我理想的建筑,这神庙里供奉的是‘人性’。”作为涉世不深的青少年,对人性的了解可能还有所局限,更多的 Perfect symphony, like a fine braided damask, can not do without interaction and coordination, listening and swaying. The combination of student writing and teacher commentary is a combination of creation and appreciation, whereby the most harmonious symphony is slowly flowing. On the tombstone of Mr. Shen Congwen reads: “I understand myself as I think; I can know ’human’ as I think.” He wrote the following passage in “Preface to His Anthology: ”There is either someone in this world who wants to build a Chongjiao Pavilion in Shaki or a water surface, that is not me, but I just want to make a small temple in Greece, choose the base of the mountain, and pile it up with hard stone.Exquisite, strong, Even though the body is small and not delicate, it is my ideal building, where the temple is devoted to ’humanity.’ "As a young underaged person, understanding of human nature may be limited and more