观察是作文的基础,但是单凭观察并不能写出特别优秀的作文。比如,有同学走进一片树林,然后记下了自己的观察所得:早晨,我走进小树林,发现小树晃动着翠绿的叶子,小鸟唧唧喳喳地叫个不停,许多露珠挂在叶尖儿上闪烁着晶莹的光。这段话写出了自己的观察所得,你认为写得怎么样呢?可能你会说“不太 Observation is the basis of essay, but observation alone can not write a particularly good essay. For example, some of my classmates walked into the woods and then took down their observations. In the morning, I went into the woods and found the small trees shaking the green leaves. The birds chirped around and many dewdrops hung on the tip Children flashing crystal light. This passage of words to write their own observations, how do you think written? Maybe you will say ”not too