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阅卷场上,我们总会看到一些选材新颖、立意准确、语言功底颇深的佳作,但在结构安排上却有不尽如人意之处,因此被遗憾地扣分。据笔者近年来评阅作文的情况来看,中考作文在结构方面出现的问题集中在以下几个方面。旁逸斜出,散乱无章。这类考生开始尚能围绕中心进行写作,写着写着别的话题就
On the reading floor, we always see some excellent works with novel materials, accurate conceptions and profound language skills. However, we have regretfully penalized points for their unsatisfactory structure. According to the author in recent years, evaluation of the situation of essay, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination questions in the structure focused on the following aspects. Yat out sideways, scattered without rule. Such candidates can still begin writing around the center, writing something else