得分亮点:多方论证,内容充实曾做到这样的题目:“孔子强调矜而不争是否有违现代的竞争观?”我思忖了一会儿,只觉得这是老人家给现时代的大智慧。同沐在一片日晖下,同枕一样的星河入梦,而人的本能却不断地告诉自己,要比别人多一份努力,多一份优势,才有更灿烂的早晨,更香甜的夜晚。(领起下文) Score highlights: multi-argument, content enrichment Had done such a problem: “Confucius stressed that without competition is against the concept of modern competition?” I thought for a moment, only think this is the great wisdom of the elderly to the present era. With Mu in a sunshine, with the same pillow into the Milky Way dream, and human instinct has been constantly told myself to be more than others a more hard work, more advantages, have a brighter morning, a more sweet night. (Led below)