我在批阅同学们的作文时,发现大家的记叙文有五种 常见病。现分叙如下,请同学 们在写记叙文时注意防治。 一、开头离题太远　　有位同学写了一篇《记一次春游》的 文章,从春游前一天准备物品开始,写了自己晚上怎样睡不着,第二天怎样早起穿衣、吃 饭、上学校、集合、排队等,一 When I read the essays of my classmates, I discovered that there are five common diseases in the narratives. The classification is as follows. Please ask the students to take precautions when writing narratives. One was too far from the beginning. A classmate wrote an article entitled “Remembering a Spring Break”. Starting from the preparation of the items the day before the Spring Travels, he wrote how he could not sleep at night and how to get up early to dress, eat, go to school, Collection, queuing, etc.