马路上,汽车飞驰,红绿灯闪烁,行人步履匆匆,像潮水一样,似乎没有什么力量能让他们驻足观望。(事件发生的地点与场景。“没有什么力量能让他们驻足观望”一语,是为下文作铺垫。)我站在马路旁,等斑马线的人行红绿灯亮起绿光,再穿过马路,到达“彼岸”。亮了,绿灯亮了,我跨着流星步,快速走过马路,几个行人紧跟在后。(场景描写很有电影镜头感,能把读者的情绪吸引住。) The road, the car speeding, traffic lights flashing, pedestrians walking in a hurry, like the tide, it seems that there is no power for them to stop waiting to see. (The place and the scene of the incident.) “There is no force to stop them waiting and watching” is paving the way for the following.) I stood by the road, zebra crossing pedestrian traffic lights glow green, and then across the road , Reach “the other side ”. Lit, green light, I walked meteor step, quickly walked the street, followed by several pedestrians. (Scene description is very cinematic, can attract the reader’s emotions.)