语言,就好比是文章的外衣,光亮与否,直接影响别人对你的第一印象。只有生动形象的语言,才能使你的文章具有风采。然而,在高考阅卷过程中,我看到有较多作文存在语言幼稚、过于口语化的问题,这些作文缺乏书面化与文学化,失去了应有的文采,削弱了思想的表达,被判为低分也在情理之中。范文示例【低分片段】进步了就得到奖励,退步了就要被批评,这是一种赏罚的标准。但是进步和退步 Language, is like the coat of the article, light or not, a direct impact on others to your first impression. Only vivid language, to make your article with style. However, during the examination of the college entrance examination, I saw that there were many essays that were naive and colloquial. These essays lacked literary writing and literature, lost their due literary grace and weakened the expression of ideas. They were sentenced as Low marks are also reasonable. Pham Van example [low score] progress to get rewarded, will be criticized for regression, which is a reward and punishment standards. But progress and regress