考生作文层次欠合理、清晰,主要表现在两个方面:一是段落划分不够合理,不是一段到底,就是分段太多,以致文脉含混;二是这个段落的内容和那个段落的内容你中有我我中有你,纠缠不清。这都反映出作者写作前缺少整体构思,想到哪儿写到哪儿,心中没谱,自然也就模糊不清、杂乱无章了。 Candidates’ composition is unreasonable and clear. It mainly manifests itself in two aspects: First, the paragraph is not reasonable enough to be divided into paragraphs. It is too fragmented to make the context ambiguous. Second, the contents of this paragraph and the contents of that paragraph are among them. There is me, I have you, tangled. This all reflects the lack of overall design before the author writes. Wherever he thinks he writes, his heart is out of line, and naturally it is ambiguous and unorganized.