我们系统刚评选出一批劳动模范和先进工作者,墙报上刊登了一批表彰先进的稿件。但是许多稿件写得不大好。其中一个普遍的毛病就是标题大而无当,失之空泛,千篇一律,都是《劳动模范×××》《×××是我们学习的好榜样》之类,体现不出各位先进人物的特点,因此就不那么吸引人,影响了宣传效果。我想,稿件的标题如果能用各人的特点进行必要的限制,就会比较具体、贴切,不致于千篇一律了。有一篇稿子,原来的标题是《劳动模范——王根宝》。根据稿件的内容,我对 Our system has just selected a number of model workers and advanced workers, published a number of posters on the commendation of advanced manuscripts. But many articles are not well written. One of the most common problems is that the title is victorious, vague and monotonous, and all are “model workers ×××” “××× are good examples of our learning.” So attractive, affecting the effectiveness of publicity. I think that if the manuscript’s title can be used to make the necessary restrictions on the characteristics of each person, it will be more specific and appropriate, so as not to be stereotyped. There is a draft, the original title is “model worker - Wang Genbao.” According to the contents of the manuscript, I am right