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作为多年的高考阅卷老师，对历年来的高分作文深有感悟，考生要想取得高分作文，除了使用必要的高级词汇以外，经典好句的合理使用，也成为获得高分作文的法宝。
一、经典句型
下面是作者在高考阅卷中，从高分试卷中摘录下来的经典句型。
[经典句型1] prefer to do ... rather than do ... 喜欢做……而不愿做……
I prefer to relax myself by listening to music after hard study rather than sleep. 喜欢学习后听音乐放松自己而不是睡觉。
She prefers to talk to his closest friends about her privacy rather than his parents. 她喜欢和自己最亲密的朋友谈自己的私事而不愿意和父母谈。
[经典句型2]There was a time when ... 曾经有段时间……（用于讲经历）
There was a time when I was disappointed at my English， but with the teacher’s help， I made rapid progress. 曾经有段时间我对自己的英语感到很失望，但在老师的帮助下，我很快取得了进步。
There was a time when I was ill at home， my classmates came to my home every day to help me with my study. 曾经有段时间我生病在家，我的同学每天到我家来帮助我学习。
[经典句型3] It is not unusual for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事很常见
It is not unusual for students to have endless assignment to do every day. 对学生来说每天有大量的作业要做是很正常的
Teachers claim that it is not unusual for students to play games on their mobile phones during the break. 老师说学生在课间玩手机游戏再正常不过了。
[经典句型4] The reason why ... is that ... ……的原因是……
The reason why I woke up late this morning is that my clock didn’t work at that time. 我醒来晚的原因是那时我的闹钟没有响铃。
The reason why he was absent from your birthday party is that he was ill in bed. 他没有参加你的生日聚会是因为他生病在床。
[经典句型5]was/were about to do when ... 正要做……突然……
Tom was about to leave for work when the phone rang.汤姆正要去上班突然电话铃声响了。
The movie was about to be shown when it began to rain. 电影即将放映突然下雨了。
[经典句型6]Only in this way can ... 只有用这种方法才能……
Only in this way can we cope with the problems we are faced with.只有用这种方法我们才能解决我们所面临的问题。
Only in this way can you resolve the differences between you and your parents.只有用这种方法你才能够解决你和你父母的分歧。
[经典句型7]A discussion on ... be carried out among sb. 某地/某时 在某时某地开展关于……的讨论
A discussion on how to reduce the students’ burden will be carried out among the teachers in the school lecture hall this Friday. 老师们将于本周五在校阶梯教室就如何减轻学生负担进行讨论。
A debate on whether students are allowed to bring their phones to school was carried out among the students last week. 上周在学生中间开展了关于是否允许学生带手机进校的辩论。
二、超级仿写
请用上面的经典句型翻译下列句子。
1. 我喜欢晚上看书而不是看电视。
2. 她喜欢和家人一起吃饭而不是朋友。
3. 有段时间我不会做饭，但妈妈教我怎么做。
4. 我曾经很害羞，但那时我却交了很多朋友。
5. 老师每周工作很多小时属于正常现象。
6. 家长希望孩子能够成才很常见。
7. 我想学英语的原因是我能够到很多国家旅游。
8. 我想看电视是因为它很放松。 9. 学生正准备考试突然火灾警报响了。
10. 孩子们正要出去玩突然天下起雨来。
11. 只有用这种方式我们才能达到我们的目标。
12. 只有用这种方式我们才能够搭建一个健康幸福的未来。
13. 今天下午将要讨论关于学校校服的问题。
14. 这学期将要讨论孩子们健康方面的问题。
参考译文
1. I prefer to read books in the evening rather than watch TV.
2. She prefers to eat dinner with her family rather than her friends.
3. There was a time when I did not know how to cook， but my mother taught me how to do it.
4. There was a time when I was very shy， but then I made many friends.
5. It is not unusual for teachers to work many hours every week.
6. It is not unusual for parents to expect their children to be succeeful.
7. The reason why I want to learn English is that I can travel to many countries.
8. The reason why I like watching TV is that it is very relaxing.
9. The students were about to take the test when the fire alarm sounded.
10. The children were about to play outside when it began to rain.
11. Only in this way can we succeed in achieving our goal.
12. Only in this way can we build a happy and healthy future.
13. A discussion on school uniforms will be carried out this afternoon.
14. A discussion on children’s health will be carried out this new term.
责任编辑 蒋小青
一、经典句型
下面是作者在高考阅卷中，从高分试卷中摘录下来的经典句型。
[经典句型1] prefer to do ... rather than do ... 喜欢做……而不愿做……
I prefer to relax myself by listening to music after hard study rather than sleep. 喜欢学习后听音乐放松自己而不是睡觉。
She prefers to talk to his closest friends about her privacy rather than his parents. 她喜欢和自己最亲密的朋友谈自己的私事而不愿意和父母谈。
[经典句型2]There was a time when ... 曾经有段时间……（用于讲经历）
There was a time when I was disappointed at my English， but with the teacher’s help， I made rapid progress. 曾经有段时间我对自己的英语感到很失望，但在老师的帮助下，我很快取得了进步。
There was a time when I was ill at home， my classmates came to my home every day to help me with my study. 曾经有段时间我生病在家，我的同学每天到我家来帮助我学习。
[经典句型3] It is not unusual for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事很常见
It is not unusual for students to have endless assignment to do every day. 对学生来说每天有大量的作业要做是很正常的
Teachers claim that it is not unusual for students to play games on their mobile phones during the break. 老师说学生在课间玩手机游戏再正常不过了。
[经典句型4] The reason why ... is that ... ……的原因是……
The reason why I woke up late this morning is that my clock didn’t work at that time. 我醒来晚的原因是那时我的闹钟没有响铃。
The reason why he was absent from your birthday party is that he was ill in bed. 他没有参加你的生日聚会是因为他生病在床。
[经典句型5]was/were about to do when ... 正要做……突然……
Tom was about to leave for work when the phone rang.汤姆正要去上班突然电话铃声响了。
The movie was about to be shown when it began to rain. 电影即将放映突然下雨了。
[经典句型6]Only in this way can ... 只有用这种方法才能……
Only in this way can we cope with the problems we are faced with.只有用这种方法我们才能解决我们所面临的问题。
Only in this way can you resolve the differences between you and your parents.只有用这种方法你才能够解决你和你父母的分歧。
[经典句型7]A discussion on ... be carried out among sb. 某地/某时 在某时某地开展关于……的讨论
A discussion on how to reduce the students’ burden will be carried out among the teachers in the school lecture hall this Friday. 老师们将于本周五在校阶梯教室就如何减轻学生负担进行讨论。
A debate on whether students are allowed to bring their phones to school was carried out among the students last week. 上周在学生中间开展了关于是否允许学生带手机进校的辩论。
二、超级仿写
请用上面的经典句型翻译下列句子。
1. 我喜欢晚上看书而不是看电视。
2. 她喜欢和家人一起吃饭而不是朋友。
3. 有段时间我不会做饭，但妈妈教我怎么做。
4. 我曾经很害羞，但那时我却交了很多朋友。
5. 老师每周工作很多小时属于正常现象。
6. 家长希望孩子能够成才很常见。
7. 我想学英语的原因是我能够到很多国家旅游。
8. 我想看电视是因为它很放松。 9. 学生正准备考试突然火灾警报响了。
10. 孩子们正要出去玩突然天下起雨来。
11. 只有用这种方式我们才能达到我们的目标。
12. 只有用这种方式我们才能够搭建一个健康幸福的未来。
13. 今天下午将要讨论关于学校校服的问题。
14. 这学期将要讨论孩子们健康方面的问题。
参考译文
1. I prefer to read books in the evening rather than watch TV.
2. She prefers to eat dinner with her family rather than her friends.
3. There was a time when I did not know how to cook， but my mother taught me how to do it.
4. There was a time when I was very shy， but then I made many friends.
5. It is not unusual for teachers to work many hours every week.
6. It is not unusual for parents to expect their children to be succeeful.
7. The reason why I want to learn English is that I can travel to many countries.
8. The reason why I like watching TV is that it is very relaxing.
9. The students were about to take the test when the fire alarm sounded.
10. The children were about to play outside when it began to rain.
11. Only in this way can we succeed in achieving our goal.
12. Only in this way can we build a happy and healthy future.
13. A discussion on school uniforms will be carried out this afternoon.
14. A discussion on children’s health will be carried out this new term.
责任编辑 蒋小青